This is disgusting, Harry should let that bitch with his brother, they deserve each other

Not a bad story. I have to agree with Fleur though, Daphne does NOT care about Harry at all. She treats Harry as if he was her possession. A tool she must have.
I think Harry being contracted to Fleur is for the best.

My advise to the writer is to let things truly escalate. I.e. let Harry leave the group for a while, making Daphne experience the results of her toxic behavior. The way she is now, won't let hear learn otherwise.

your making harry a bitch with the sit shit

ferret malloy trash son of a death eater

Terrible and inconsistent.

Great story.

what a fic bro please update

it's a good premise, but at least for me, you focus too much on sexualising everything. All of the girls go after Harry just because of his body and it makes all of them look brainless and it adds nothing to the story. Most of you female characters are in some situation where they are going to be raped, you use the consent of rape wayyyy to often, you can show how cruel the death eaters are without rape being brought up every chapter, it overdone and seems trashy, almost like you couldn't find any other crimes.

OMFGGG YASSS TRACY! THIS IS THE VERBAL BEAT DOWN I WAS WAITIN FOR! I officially retract my statement about hating you! Gods Daphne's such a fukin bchhh like ghorl you're one of his closest friends and she hasn't picked up on that fact?! Fleur has a valid excuse only knowing him from the start of the tournament add to that she is his fiance so no matter what Daphne does Fleur will always be the first Harry prioritizes in terms of romance cause its the logical thing for him to do even if he still does not get it

Has nobody asked if Harry's Asexual? I mean l know he lived out in the wild for 6 years but really? it stunted his humanity that far? Even fukin Tarzan found love under a year after meeting jane and he's lived in a gods damn jungle all his life! Even if he was away that many years puberty and hormones should have kicked him in the face! Im giving the benefit of a doubt due to his unusual circumstances but honestly I would love for him to be asexual cause I literally hate all his 'sisters' except may Astoria? and him being one is a smack to their faces! Gods they're using their close relationship to him to manipulating the outcome of his love life! If someone I consider a friend or at least someone important is that clueless I would at least help the guy out cause in Harry's situation it's becoming such a burden that he needed to search up what to do and why it's happening! Becoming asexual would leave him with fleur and fleur only and that's a good thing cause honestly Fleur can make a gay guys go straight and straight girls go gay... also Fleur's the only one currently not actively gatekeeping him and the people he calls his 'sisters' are indirectly making his life miserable gods this is not Alabama!

I can't stand your writing style unfortunately, it's all over the place

I wish this story had continued. _

So the staff or at least Madam Pomfrey knows about the string of sexual assault that happens every year in Slytherin and they ... do nothing?

wis you had carried on with this as like the storyline

Ahora, pueden explicar como Harry se fue hasta Francia para salvar a todos esos estudiantes? También, como sabia que eso estaba pasando?