Reviews for Feral
SlowestTurtle chapter 12 . 8/19
The denseness is just painful. Can't read a second more.
el santo pegaso chapter 11 . 7/31
Que manĂ­as tienen en cambiar el nombre de Harry.
Devilking1994 chapter 23 . 6/20
What? ok so Harrys friends want to be with him we have known this for a while but then why did they agree to him taking on the contract? Surely they could of just told him how they felt earlier and started dating him and not include fleur in the group or maybe if they had talked to her about it then she could have been included

This story is so weird at times
Devilking1994 chapter 15 . 6/20
You realise that all of Harrys friends you know the ones that are interested in him as a man plus Fleur are all rather Toxic I would run a fucking mile from these girls

This isn't a romance story it's a horror story
Devilking1994 chapter 14 . 6/20
that's just not cricket how they attacked him at the start I mean sure it's not against the rules but if that's how they are going to "play the game" then if I was him I would do the exact back to them if they want to fight dirty then fuck em do it back to them
Devilking1994 chapter 12 . 6/19
You realise you are making all of these chicks Harry is close to look like annoying bitches atm?

You've made Harry too Dense and slow it's incredibly annoying

Also his female friends acting behind his back without any consideration to his opinion make them look awfully toxic
Devilking1994 chapter 10 . 6/19
If she told me to sit well that would piss me off massively more so than Harry is showing here

"I'm not a fucking dog!" would make more sense because that was just a cunty move by her

Also he has every right to be angry and hurt that they have known about this for months
Devilking1994 chapter 7 . 6/19
Oh come on I know Harry has lived away from people but even he would understand what is going on with the women around him this plot point is so silly it boggles the mind

Hell he has lived with the Greengrasses for years now since he was 10-11 I think he would have gotten a much better understanding of how people work by now
Devilking1994 chapter 6 . 6/19
A symbol on Harrys cheek? That's pretty cringe
Devilking1994 chapter 3 . 6/19
Why would Harry have to leave for half the summer? that makes little sense to me
Devilking1994 chapter 1 . 6/19
Won't the Potters come for him now that they know where he is? I mean sure they may have treated him badly and ignored him for his brother but surely they still love him and will try and get him back that's not to say he will want to return but I could see him having to sneak away from the Potter family coming to collect him at the train station at the end of the year to get back to the Greengrasses
Fellbane chapter 4 . 5/29
Throwing stunners at rapist Death Eaters was extremely similar to what the weak canon Harry would do and your Harry did the same thing here.
Sanders7201 chapter 30 . 3/31
loving the story. i hope that you ignore the haters and continue it. its a fun ride so far.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/5
lilie you whore
Guest chapter 3 . 3/5
dumb dumb fag lol
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