You need to learn how to layout a story, this is impossible to read.

Please finish

Omg you just blew my mind

Please continue this story I am really liking it.

shit

in this story does Thea kill Sara or you plan on not having that part happen?

Oh please continue this. A badass Felicity training with Malcolm. Oh yes please!

Okay then.

This story has great promise, and I think it could make an excellent multi-chapter story. But a few things to consider:

Everything runs together. I've found, to make it easier to read, that it's best to separate dialogue; IE
"This is easier to read" Felicity said.

"I agree." Malcolm said.

Like that (sorry, it easier to show you than try to explain it.:)

Other than that, I'd like to see this continued.

yeah update is so good! just one thing, does thea know about oliver being the arrow?

I like where you are going with this story. As for the comment that another reviewer left, I have not read a story the is exactly the same as yours. There is a story where Malcolm is Felicity's dad too, but not the same plot as you. Maybe you can seperate sentences a little more so they are not long paragraphs, otherwise great intro. Cant wait for an update.

love it xoxo

I really like it. I would like to read more if you wanted to write more!

Ohhhh this is got some much potential.

You do know that someone on here has almost the same exact story? Just to let you know.