Oh! I know what happens next!
Over Two Years Of Waiting

-a random Asperger's

Yay so good please continue

Are you gonna continue this awesome fic?

so...what is the 'Headless chicken-leg incident'?

I would loooove to hear about that!

This is such an interesting idea, and its so well written! I can't wait for more!

I see you gave Neville a good swinging arm (chekov gun: kill the snake seriously that was my favorite exchage in book seven. That goes a bit like this

"Neville there is something important I want you to do and I can't tell you why but I want you to kill the snake."
"Kill the snake?"
"Kill the snake."
"Kill the snake."

That would have been awesome to see that in the last movie).

Wow. This is an utterly fascinating take on fractured Harry, and a blast to read. Wouldn't mind seeing an updated version of the list Hermione was working on on the train at this point, but meh.

Characterizations are just aces, and I'm rather curious to see where this is going.

I'd can't wait to see the next update

Flitwick should stop before he gets a brain aneurysm

i really want you to update this brilliant piece of woek

Great. Though I wonder why Fluttershy could handle spicy.

Amazing! I hope you get inspired!

Wait wait wait. How in the flippity fuck did Fluttershy manage to eat a liquid rainbow and spicy pepper cupcake and not be bothered by it at all!? I guess she's the liar then...

Great story!

Only question I have about this is... are the 6 who are sharing Harrys body the legit mane 6 and somehow replaced Harrys mind/soul, or mental constructs formed by Harrys magic? There seems to be some sort of middle ground from the looks of things, they only have vauge knowledge and small deja vu every now and then when something similar to equestria catches their interest and from Twilights introduction they seems to have "formed" or something and named themselves afterwards with whatever felt right.

Thats literally the only problem im having so far since it's not very... defined. Are they fragments of Harrys shattered mind and thus "Harry" or the mane 6 from equestria? Shoot, them being Harry would actually be pretty interesting since it means they are all sum of his parts at this point and might be able to merge for whatever reason back into him later on. You seem to be hinting slightly at that since the horcrux in Harrys scar still exists and that alone means Harry, despite his current mental state as 6 female ponies, is still Harry. The horcrux still existing means Harrys soul is untouched by whatever caused the split since that things literally latched onto his soul in canon so only killing him would remove it.. if its still there is means Harry never died or anything like that so the question is how did his mind split into perfect representations of cartoon characters?

Only thing I can see causing such a perfect fragmentation into the 6 seperate personalities is if Harry was deeply effected by them at some point when he was young and the impact led to his mind latching onto their images/memories of them and creating mental copies to cope with the trauma of his near death experience. Magics done stranger things in Harry Potter canon so might be possible. Shoot, with the abuse and horrible childhood he had its actually possible that he saw them on TV at somepoint or heard of them and due to the show literally being about peace, harmony, and friendship he instictivly latched onto it for a little light in his dark childhood.

In other words im confused on what your trying to do. Sure it would be interesting to see Harry or "System" get called out on it when one of the rare muggleborn students who actually know of the show and its characters noticed the perfect similarities but there wuld still be some issues if thats indeed what your hinting at like how does his Twilight personalitie know PONY magic?

At that point it would most likely lead the mane 6 to realise after desperatly searching for their orgins after hearing of it from a third party.. that they don't exist. Think Harry in canon had some issues? Imagine having a breakdown multiplied by 6 when you realise your basically a living lie conjured by a damaged mind to cope with the stress of your own family trying to kill you.

Yeah.. that wouldn't be pretty at all. Just imagine what would happen if Pinkie went "Party of One" or Twilight going "Lesson Zero" on Hogwarts because if such an existinal crisis doesn't cause that kind of reaction nothing will. Would still be hilarious though~

Anyways sorry for the super log review, I kind of tend to get over excited when finding a good fic since its VERY rare I find one that catches my interest like this one did. Its a good fic so keep up the good work!