Reviews for The Brightest Flame
Dwarrior chapter 1 . 12/11/2015
He's always there to save her. Why haven't they got together yet ( pulling out hair). I loved this alterate ending to the phantom lord arc. Good job.
FatalityMass chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
That was really cool! I really enjoyed the fight and Natsu's reward at the end.
Darlingdanielle chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Yea I wish that was how it ended :,( darn you Trollasima. I like your revamp of it :)
Lightningblade49 chapter 1 . 12/30/2014
Your pretty good with the one shots I got to say would be interesting to see you expand on a Fairytail fic.
The Cursed World chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Man you fucked it up really nicely. The fight scene was fucking awesome. Wow nice ass kicking natsu did.
TSW chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Happyyyyy, he's totally a moment ruiner... :( But cool written fight! Good job on your first Nalu ;) Keep writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2014
I think you did a good job with this.
Stickermans50 chapter 1 . 11/22/2014
A little bit of mistakes, Which i should probably point out.
(1) screamed lucy, yelled the blonde, shouted the celestial wizard. Don't just do that, use "you bastard, " Lucy said/screamed/shouted
(2) 5-6 grammatical errors.

About the story/chapter :
Man awesome fight, it was your first but it was a pretty good fight. (Not as good as mine though...Just kidding) the dragon force was a pretty good idea and the last kiss actually both. They were awesome great. Hope to see the new version of N.L-T.C
Ryuoujin chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
It's impressive seeing a NaZa fan writing a nice NaLu piece

This was a very decent and good story; well done