Reviews for The Young God |
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![]() ![]() Very good fanfiction but why did it end so suddenly? |
![]() ![]() Love it so far please make more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really love this story can't wait for new chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this is so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() gods grew faster than mortals... just look at artemis |
![]() ![]() please make more of this I really love this so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() pls continue this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why did you left this story man it's quite good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sad to see this story discontinued |
![]() ![]() ![]() I get this is supposed to be a story about an AU Naruto, but giving him an Eastern name when he’s the child of the King God of Greek Mythology is just lazy. This is typically why Apollo is used as Naruto’s father in these crossovers. The blond hair and blue eyes? The tan? Those things they both have in common. Apollo’s obsession with Haikus? Great way to implement the Eastern name believably. This could be excused if it was Zeus having an affair with an Eastern woman, but Hera is the one giving birth to Naruto. It doesn’t add up. Your whole story’s premise starts with Zeus deciding to never cheat on Hera again, leading to Naruto’s birth and travesty of a name. This story is more dead than hotmail, so seeing this ever having even a chance of being changed is not happening. Though I doubt that even if it was still being updated that you’d change the name. Just overall, the name doesn’t fit. If you had given him the whiskers, then this would have been a far shittier review. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, hope you are able to continue this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Continue |
![]() ![]() I love the storyline so far. Please keep writing amazing fanfictions like this. |