Reviews for A Game of Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() More please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a good story. sucks that it was abandoned |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is brittish, so wouldn't have that much of an issue with her age... English age of consent is 16... Americans on the other hand would, as far as I know they have one of the most severe age of consent in the WORLD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() continue., please |
![]() ![]() ![]() :hearts: |
![]() ![]() ![]() stupid ass shit. gotta make some drama. no wand. just dumb |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said harry was technically op but he didnt kill anyone and now has to deal with greyjoy? So far the only thing hes good at is sneaking. So far harry seems weak. Couldnt even kill the squids. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very intersting story here so far! |
![]() ![]() It's a shame the story has been abandoned. I like the development though |
![]() ![]() ![]() Any chance you’re continuing this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a great story and I hope one day you’ll decide to continue it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very very smart fic hope you continue it someday ! |
![]() ![]() Please continue! Maybe he can slowly increase the land in the surrounding area? He will eventually make more money and be able to do more. What if he defeats Moore's cousin and Jon gives him that land/island through Rite of Conquest... Next the 3 Sisters. After gets control of the Islands he can use them as out post and guards against sea invasions. Maybe even Habors, Trading Posts, and Mining... shipyards not so much, bc small islands only have so many trees. |
![]() ![]() ![]() have you heard the term "white man's burden" or something similar, it's a team used by colonial rulers. Hermione and this fics Harry remind me of it a lot. that's why i didn't love her, same reason i didn't like your fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great beginning! |