I just realised this isn’t finished hahaha. Still, it’s very well done and a great read so far. Thanks for writing it! Maybe one day you’ll update.

Loved this story thank you for sharing, would be nice to have it completed, however it has ended here on a pleasant note.

To the vulgar 'Guest' writer Pg 1. commenting on chapters 2 through to 24, perhaps you should sign in before abusing a brilliant author, so that you can't hide. I would suggest also going back to the school room to learn English Expression and Literature, your vocabulary is very limited...

AN INSIPID INCOMPLETE STORY

Disgusting. This cunt writer is taking the bingley bitches to Pemberley. Thank fuck you stopped writing such trash

Cunt writer has the libertine Colonel kissing Elizabeth even before he r husband. This prostitute should let Elizabeth fuck the Colonel already. White trailer trash

So the prostitute didn't want to write about Darcy giving Caroline the cut or restricting her from his homes! Fucking bullshit story

So it's okay and acceptable fot the Bennet bitches to behave as mannerless uncouth mancrazy mercenaries while Darcy must be the only person to change to accommodate these bitches? Cunt writing

The cunt Elizabeth thinks she's a fucking catch when her father was an indolent negligent poor excuse for a husband and father expecting others to take up the burden after he died and vapid Jane uses that for the ass sitting in his bookroom for majority of his pathetic life.
Poor arrogant cunt Elizabeth cannot tell off her mercenary uncouth mother and sisters who should have a governess.
What a fucking disgusting story where the Bennet bitches should have been in the hedgerows

A lot of energy, WTF, the harpy uncouth mrs Bennet is a disgrace, Mary is s pedantic freak, the two youngest are mancrazy mercenary girls. Jane is an insipid pretty face

Stupid cunt writer just leaves lady Catherine at Darcy while he fucking runs off instead of kicking her out.

So there was no will reading for the indolent Bennet, he left fuck all to his family, was there even a will made?

Elizabeth is a stubborn cunt but her harpy mother is the worst of the lot, an embarrassment who did nothing to save her money nor convince her indolent husband to secure his family before he died. Bennet should burn in hell

The libertine gossiping asshole Colonel assumes Darcy owes him explanations because he's living off the largesse of Darcy, rather than his titled family

Elizabeth is still an arrogant ungrateful prejudiced fool of a girl,.raised like a clone by her indolent cynical bookworm father whose only joy was see

The mercenary uglyface Charlotte Collins is now mistress of longbourn, her ultimate goal