I enjoyed your story, it's seems so promising. But, I would like it to be longer...

It may have been done before, but this is the best version I've read. I love how you've blended it in so well and have actually captured their emotions and thoughts to match their characters so well. I look forward to reading more soon.

Always happy to see a new take on this trope. At least in your version she has the opportunity to read his letter first so she's had some of her misconceptions corrected. That will help pave the way for a smoother outcome.

Very good!

I like your take on what could happen.

I look forward to more!

Thank you from me.

Loved it. Plz update soon.

I know what you mean about the characters not being true in most forced marriage stories. Although I believe they may not be comfortable talking about their feelings, I do believe they would both be kind in their actions. Looking forward to your take on this scenario.

Very, very well done. I can't wait to read more!

sounds very promissing...
take your time to have it just the way you want
I will curb my impatience !

Great start and I like the ideas for the story you've posted in your note - looking forward to the next chapter :)

Great start! I can't wait to read the rest! Update soon!

I like it. You are a good writer. Please keep going.

I really liked your first chapter! Can't wait till the next one :)