My god, you made me stay up till the early morning hours! Absolutely fell in love with this story. It’s wonderfully sexy but the plot is also very catching!

Very sincerely hope it hasn’t been abandoned (as it’s been a year since the last update) but I am grateful for your sharing this story either way!

Did I catch correctly that you write original fiction? I’d love to read some of that!

Marvellous! Love all the things!

I just read a 30 chapter fic just for them not to fuck? This was a waste of my time

I check back here frequently because I am just dying to know how you. plan to resolve this! Love it.

I knew better than to start a WIP….
This has been an incredible read and I cannot wait for more. The remaining time of the Ribbon and the impending revelation that they’re going to fight the end of the ritual to stay together. It’s going to be phenomenal. I truly hope you still have plans to complete this fic, because we readers are eagerly awaiting completion.

Did you know that you can only review a chapter once? Well, now I do, because this is what I had planned to leave for you:

Argh. Again. I have read this story at least once a year, always knowing that it is not yet completed, and STILL end it by wishing you could magically wave your wand and have it completed. You’re nearly as bad as Severus with your wicked desire for anticipation! And I LOVE you for it! Please never give up on this fic — it is so good on so many levels! (And I really want to see more of Neville’s grandmother! Hahaha!)
Fondly (yet squirming with anticipation),
Jen/mlbd

Please update!

I really appreciate how thoughtfully you approached this story so it fits into the wizarding world we all love so much. The Harry Potter books were so innocent. The approach that you’ve taken acknowledges that gap, satisfies the ask for some great smut, while sharing a compelling story that just fits. I find myself immersed, your story fits like a puzzle piece onto the canon (with a few disclaimers at the beginning).

Loving the story, can’t wait for more, and I deeply appreciate your research!

Wow. What a way to end the chapter! I told myself that I was just going to finish this chapter then get back to work, and then that last line crumbled all resolve. Excellent writing! Thanks for sharing your story!

Noooooo I need more please.

One of my most favorite stories on FFN! I would be crazy excited to see another chapter, if you could please 3

Ohhhh my gosh I didn’t realize this wasn’t complete yet! This is absolutely enthralling, I haven’t been able to put this down. Thank you so much for sharing.

This is so delightful.

Men wear ribbons too ? So the Mentoris can be female too or just male ? Or is this a gay thing too ? I’m confused?

Augustus caught him as he left the reading room. The rotund little man clasped his hand, grinning up at him. "I wore the ribbon myself," he beamed and Severus hated the fact that every ribbon-wearer would seek him out now. "It's a fine tradition. My Mentoris," he sighed and his bright eyes grew misty, "lovely man. And after everything…for a muggle-born to be the first. And you being war heroes. You're both a shining, shining example."

if another man touches hermione Severus will feel it ? If another woman touches Severus will hermione feel it as that sexist if another woman can touch Severus but no man can touch hermione !

"If you are certain of their…regard, then it is safe. The rule is set as a blanket to protect The Agreement." He turned his ring, light glinting over the gold. "Our bond is new. In time, this will flare if someone who shouldn't touches you. Men are aware of this. I will duel any who break it." He stood. "Make yourself ready. We'll go to Kensington as soon as you are." And with a sweep of his coat he was gone from the library.