Reviews for Falls Soft |
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![]() ![]() a lovely read |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a cute fic! Ryuichi and Shuichi make a good team. I can just picture Ryu-chan playing the guitar all cute-like and stuff _. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very nice, short fic. You've got a good grasp on all the characters, particularly Ryuichi's. I loved the optimistic tone of the piece, and it's fairly well written. Watch your grammer on a few little things, such as "two, to, and too" and the suffixes after names. It's not necessary to capitilize "san," "chan," etc. Some of your transitions could have been a little smoother also, such as when Shuichi finishes his song and we see the crowd's reaction. Keep writing, I like what I've seen. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ; Annoying woman...Heheh, this was cute! Please write more soon! ~fd97 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoo hoo! Go, Shuichi! Go, Ryuichi! You show that girl up! I liked this, it was cute! _ MEOW! |
![]() ![]() Cute story! I liked it. _ |
![]() ![]() SUGOI DESU KA! *glomps the fic* This is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO great! *sighs dreamily* I'm now officially in love with that song... |
![]() ![]() Very nice! The song was a bit choppy so I had to read it twice to get it, but the message was really sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, i know you didn't write the lyrics, but "Your hair falls soft like animals" ? eeeeh... anyway, very cute ficcie _ |