a sad ending but it need an epilogue something to honer this fallen fighter that is what i have to say for Elveril
and for you the author (who apparently has the same name) Elveril i wish you the best of luck in your future works this story was a brilliant one which captured my attention from begging to ending and i see you have 2 other stories as well (both have the same effect with me as this story does) i hope they are doing well and once again good fortune to you and never give up your amazing talent at writing stories

Awesome so far elv i love how the story has gone so far and i hope you are having fun making this

Make more plz
Great story really enjoy it make more

OMG, I have chills going down my spine hehe. God damn I would have hated doing that boot camp. Brilliant chapter Elv, can't wait for the big fight and to see what percy does after that talk we had a while back. Brilliant chapter and brilliant story. I love reading your stories always makes for a good read when I see you have a new chapter. Looking forward for the next chapter

You know in a story I read either yesterday or the day before, Athena actually did say that Percy had two aspects, and didn't even know the depths of his powers. Also Triton needs to get his ego in check otherwise next time whether he apologizes or not he will be sent to Tartarus. Percy Jackson is known for giving second chances, so I'd say this would be Triton's last chance.

nice update. I loved it.

Well its good to see Triton is the same as ever haha. Can't wait to see if Angel looses it or if it is Percy that does. Either way i'm looking forward to it. As always another brilliant chapter and i'm looking forward to the next one

Such a cool story! I'm really enjoying it. Please write more and I'm just wondering why is it M rated. It doesn't seem like it should be. Awesome plot line and I love the detail. Keep writing and let me know when the next chapter comes

Triton is probably a little peanut butter and ”Jelly”

Nice, very nice! I really enjoyed that.

And yet again another brilliant chapter for the Son of Hestia! Love the idea with the Flaming Doves and also the rapier that Aphrodite gave her daughter, should prove quite useful when it comes to fights as she in theory will be extremely fast with the weapon and also if she knows how to break through any armour or defence her opponent has. Can wait to see if Poseidon helps his daughter out with her powers as percy is extremely busy and preoccupied at the moment with the war starting and also destroying portions of the monster army. Can't wait for the next chapter and now i have to read your other two stories haha.

Oh please even if Poseidon didn't have a crush on his eldest sister once she wouldn't need to pray like that. One, she's close to Percy, two, she's friends with his daughter, and three, unlike Zeus, Poseidon may already love his niece enough to come when she asks. Plus I'm thinking Angel should get her uncles blessing so she can heal herself and anyone so long as she is near water in addition to her natural abilities from her mother. Plus being in water could even strengthen her mother's powers.

Loved it super good story but just to let u know it not in her power to be control by love gods or goddesses even Eros can't do it but I loved but I did like when you did it lol but why did the hunt not stop the spy can't wait it the next chapter love it love it love it keep up the good work :) :) :) :)

Stunning! Can't believe your French! Please update soon

Damn that was a fun chapter to read. The one thing that I love about this story and the betrayed hero is how you plan out the story and how you always seem to keep me on the edge of my seat. I have a feeling of who in theory may end up fighting Erebus when the final battle comes to hand. Love both your stories and keep up the brilliant work Elveril!