Wow Artemis doesn't seem bright at times taking delight in breaking up families.

why is annabeth living there? if she's a goddess she should be living in Olympus. even if there were a god/goddess of heroes and CHB was his/her domain they shouldn't be living there. i've read a lot of stories where the rest of the seven, nico and the brat for whom camp betrays percy are made gods and live in camp. no god interact/intervene with mortals except on occasions.

Their is a time skip in second chapter, so is their going to be flash back or any thing. It would fill in some holes. This chapter dint have much about Percy. It was all about the new occ. also the new oc character is kind of strong I mean really strong.

Of course Hades is Percy's favorite Uncle. He's the favorite of all children of Poseidon/Neptune. While Poseidon and Hades are probably the favorite uncles of Thalia, and all children of Hestia.

Great job

Great story so far

i like this and agree with what the person before me said

Not Bad, you have the beginnings of a great story here. I look forward to seeing how you develop the story line. Good Luck!