I love it so keep going my friend.

This deserves a sequel.

I hope you come back to this story soon. I really enjoy it.

you'll come back soon?

I came across this fan fiction by a YouTube video and I got to say this is definitely some of the best work of fiction I've ever come across sucks that it's almost over if it hasn't been discontinued all together

If this is delayed, how much delay you planned for this fic, care to tell the readers, Mr. VFSNAKE?

It was nice until it became bashing fic and character started to do from vile yet understandable things to straight up cartoonish evil things just to justify the bashing they deserve.

the third could remove his advisers/council/old team mates anytime he wants to he forgets the village is not a democracy it's a dictatorship and he is the one in charge and is just being a pussy

like this story it's been 6 -7 years and no update would be great if it was finished.

a year to build a bridge the hell is making it taking so long they built the damn thing in naruto in like less then week while they where being attacked. so with not being attacked it should take like 2 to 3 days

Man people hate Sakura's parents who are nice people and then don't even get their names right. I swear there's a multiverse of fake Haruno's

I love it so keep it up my friend.

The story is good, but it could be even better if you continued the story and put in descriptive lemon scenes AKA XXX scenes and future chapters.

Good!

Coooool

Good