Reviews for Maleficent Kitsune |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue this story it’s really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue with the story, it's very good, please don't give up, a story that really has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a big fan of this type of story and the truth is that they have no comparison. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I regret reading this since now I'm hooked and this is abandoned... Well we can say that the story is over since it clearly ended one arc... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is this story forgotten!? It’s too good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() couldn't even tell them abt naruto? but Jiraiya already did... a few paragraphs ago- |
![]() ![]() ![]() is this story just dead and abandoned |
![]() ![]() As head of clan asshat, I demand 3 more chapters. Now. Or we withdraw our support for transporting gas out of asses and you'll all explode! Hahaha! |
![]() ![]() Ahhh, you were getting much better, and yet once again horrible grammar regarding descriptions especially. Simply try to avoid pvercomplicated explanations perhaps? Also, your Danto is even more stupid than the original... |
![]() ![]() Nah, locked away, kept alive, healthy, but brainless, and create enough new Uchiha to create a well educated, meaningful and GOOD clan. Then let orochimaru experiment on theeye, arm, leg and dickless remains. |
![]() ![]() You should get a beta. Really, your plots and stories are good, but from time to time your sentence and grammar structure becomes so convoluted that even I (business English minor at college) am having trouble to understand what you are trying to confer. Not to mention clear signs of not being a native speaker like saying an object has wealth. Wealth can only belong to persons, legal or natural, not inactive things. Just as an example. Summing it up: good story, but it could be a great one with the abovementioned problems removed. |
![]() ![]() Gotta say, your jiraya is quite the cold variant. You rarely see that, in part cause spy Master or not, he is too often depicted as dumb brute. Intruiging! Also, poor tsunade. Always the wrong decisions... |
![]() ![]() Muuuuch more intriguing than your standard Vader time travel star wars story. That one wasn't bad, mind, but maleficent and Naruto? With these 2 as her semi familiar? Evil yet very intriguing and cool. Kudos. |
![]() ![]() Bro fucking REALLY?! What kinda shit is this author on? Itachi would fuck Maleficent six ways from Sunday. She would stand absolutely NO chance against him. Sure she might me able to do that detect bullshit, but all it takes is ONE glance and it's over for her! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm hoping you continue some of your older stories that is not completed. some of them are great and need to be finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well glad you haven't abandoned your older stories at least still hope that is the case since there some really good ones along with this one. keep up the good work and looking forward to the updates. |