well it's been 4 years pretty sure this story is abandoned no matter what you a/n says also you have others that have not had updates in 7 years i would like to know if you going to finish them anytime soon if not i can move on and read other writers stuff.

how did the bugs never figure that out before after all that clan put's one on everyone they come near

but there are clans in the leaf with no bloodlines at all so the whole they only like them for the bloodline thing makes no sense.

no ninja don't have to fallow the rules the whole point they exist is to get around rules

only problem being they can't remove the hokage from office they can only kill him and advice in a replacement thats it.

1000 jutsus there ass he never even used close to 100 so think that is just hype.

Please continue with this story it is very good.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

This was pretty good.

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Va tu continuer l'histoire ?

Naruto is just a bit too mature here. Of course he trusts maleficent, but that doesn't take away his abandonment issues. Without understanding hey choices, writing a small nagging fear would've made sense. It would've also given you a good chance for thank to bond a bit.

I can't say enough good things about this story. Sure, it has its flaws. I'm almost certain that most of the literary ones were due to an overly eager auto correct function.

That said, Maleficent was amazing. I absolutely loved her attitude. My only issue beyond some of her backstory which I moved past was the evil bit. The whole "powers of hell" bit didn't sit well with me. She was never a witch, but interested a fairy out whatever you call those winged people in the sequel. Still, I was very fond of her character.

Naruto was certainly interesting in this story, if slightly op. You talked keyed in on his loyalty. He could've been developed a bit further though as he felt very two dimensional. Also, his affections for Hinata felt incredibly forced. The memory thing was a slight stretch but everything beyond that was simply too much. I mean, calling them friends at all is a bit of a direct. It's more like, "oh yeah, it's that one chick I saved from being bullied that one time... cool. Mystery solved." Instead you gave us this huge ordeal like they'd been friends forever and tragically torn apart. I'm going a bit overboard here but you get what I'm saying.

It stuck me as odd that maleficent wanted a castle. It seems very human and not her style. I get that she was creating an image but I wish you could've worked around that.

My thoughts aside. Marvelous story. I hope it isn't as abandoned as it seems. I'd love to hear what you have planned for it in thr future but you're at a good place for a time skip.

Last thing. I was sad the caged bird seal wasn't addressed at the end there.

Hmm, so this isn't really a maleficent crossover. That irks me a bit. Your maleficent is closer to the sleeping beauty version, especially with her whole queen of darkness schtick. I never viewed the new version as evil. She simply manipulated nature.

You should've done a whole bit where this dark forest grew around maleficent. The powerful and dangerous creatures within all felt here power's call. The whole reason the leaf village was built there being that the first hokage's was using his power to contain it or something.

Absolutely amazing story hope you update it some time in the future because I love this story.

But...as root members they alresdy know, and you already stated that they HELPED...