Reviews for Daybreak
Arwengeld chapter 18 . 10/28/2018
Mm, is this Chris a real frien or a spy for Volturi ?
Arwengeld chapter 15 . 10/27/2018
mm, maybe Tanya is so upset with Edward that she'lle go to volterra in order to speak anout Bella ?
Kristen.Dayringer.73 chapter 26 . 12/1/2017
I love this story, I can't wait for you to update. But there is this really evil part of me that really wants to know what would happen if Jacob did imprint with someone else. I really feel for poor Edward, you can tell he is trying to respect her wishes now. He deserves to be happy too, Jacob was wrong in continuing to make advances to Bella. I get it he loves her, but she was in a relationship, she WAS happy. She technically cheated on Edward emotionally. I almost feel like she's getting what she deserves for hurting so many people. I'm sorry but if you cry for months over someone you love and even go as far as to pretend to still be with them while dreaming maybe that's who you should have been with. People are going to die because of her actions. She is very selfish. Which means she is perfectly flawed not like how she was written in the books. She was too bland and too emotionless in the books. In your story, she has so much character and attitude even if it infuriates me. I wonder how she would actually react if Edward found someone else to be with and if Jacob imprinted. Would she fight for Jacob? Would she return to Edward? Would he take her back? So many questions.
mini pony lover chapter 3 . 8/22/2017
This was good. thank you for writing this!
Asia126 chapter 26 . 8/13/2017
i got chills reading this story. Please update id really love to know what happens next.
Ester Shadow chapter 26 . 7/26/2017
i love the story
SamAKAwolfgirl chapter 1 . 5/1/2017
Really wish you would finish this story xxx
Cat O'Hara Butler chapter 26 . 8/4/2016
Oh my gosh! I just binged this story in under 24 hours! I stayed up 4 hours past when I should have been asleep to keep reading and I just couldn't put it down! Please update soon so I can find out what happens!
alba1020 chapter 26 . 6/23/2016
So glad to see an update, this was a nice chapter to read, all the moments with family and pack and Jake were touching. Can't wait for the next!
Wisegirlandseaweedbrain20 chapter 26 . 6/23/2016
Hey! This is an amazing story! Please write more!
sarahmicaela88 chapter 3 . 6/17/2016
This girl makes me wanna cry from frustration, scream from exsasperation, and slap some sense into her.
I lost count of how many times I rolled my eyes in this chapter she's so ridiculous. I'm sorry but she is. I've seen PTSD victims that bitch less than she does. Fuck gun shot victims that cry in pain less than she does. What the hell is her deal?
I get what Teddy boy meant to her, but fuck if she really needed him as much as she claims she did than why the fuck did she choose Jake and make him go through the misery again of stitching her back 2gether again. What the hells the point? God she is the Queen of drama queens.
She and Jacob should be basking in the joy of being together and in love and planning a future together not. Jacob shouldnt have to babysit an emotional cripple back from the brink because thats what she is.
Stephanie MRV chapter 26 . 5/27/2016
Oh my god please update soon. I love this story. I dont know how they will go against the volturi but i think she should change. She will cause so many lives if she doesn't. Its better than dying and they can still be together. If jacob can be with reneesme then he can be with vampire bella
4Gracie04 chapter 26 . 5/25/2016
Great chapter! I feel so sad for the happy couple believing their days are numbered. I'm glad they are so close now! So adorable! Please let Alice's vision be wrong or change it. Maybe, Aro will be distracted and forget about Bella. Love the story! Can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
So Bella is going to choose an underage immature 16 year old boy when she is supposed to be a old middle aged soul at almost 19 years of age. She had begged Edward to become a vampire because she wanted forever with him then she just changes her mind. She agrees to marry Edward (his one request) but she still has demands and backs out again. I am not sure that I like a selfish bratty indecisive inconciderate Bella. Also she had signed her death warrant when she went to Italy to save Edward. The Volturi have required her to be changed into a vampire. The pack is tiny compared to the Volturi forces who would decimate them to have Bella comply to the no humans must know about vampires. Why did she run of to Italy to save Edward in the first place, it would have made it easier and much more plausible to end up with Jacob then.
DeaththeKidOCD chapter 25 . 3/3/2016
Yay! More please!
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