Reviews for Sinful Pleasures, Consuming Darkness
Bleeding Blue Kunoichi chapter 18 . 1/7/2016
I love this story! Granted as much as i would love for you to continue the kili/skye/fili lemon, this is worth waiting for the other. At first i hesitated in reading it, not because of the triggers (i am a bit into bdsm myself), but just the thought of seeing the dwarrow in this light. It amazed me how well you turned Thorin into an overbearing, sadistic ass. All the while changing Kili and Fili but still managing to keep their essences from the movies and book. How you did that first lemon with thorin followed by a beastly (loved that very much btw) Kili and a semi tender Fili was outstanding. Now for my pondering... i wonder if kili or fili will ever come across her sketchbook, and of course the reaction. I dont think this is too beauty and the beast. You had me on edge wondering when fili would show up again. Also i am thinking that Kili is training her in a way as a thank you and also will help if she has to save his ass again.. though he would never admit that. I wonder if a lemon involving the two brothers and her will ever come up? We have had all three, individual with Thorin and Kili (speaking if that you could toss one in with just Fili i wouldnt mind), and one with thorin and fili. Your smut is some of the best i have ever read... trust me thats saying something... my fiance doesnt get that i would much rather read my porn than watch it (thank you romance novels). It goes without saying i cant wait for the next chapters
Guest chapter 18 . 12/31/2015
Honestly all I've considered you fabulous story is just that, a fabulous story. I've been keeping track of it ever you fist you started writing and I've never drawn comparisons to it being anything other than that. In a way it's refreshing to experience a new take on the dark side of the Hobbit characters. Anyone with common sense would know you're not promoting women being subject to men or any that you've described above. Personally I like the way Sky is dealing with her circumstances and would like to know what happens next, because this calls attention to an extraordinary circumstance. Nothing I have ever read has been like this and that's why it's one of my favorites. I hope you continue just because it's so different from what other people have written.
Vanafindiel chapter 18 . 12/31/2015
Well said.
starcrossedloddy chapter 18 . 12/31/2015
Great Authors note. It really shows that regardless of how many good reviews you get, regardless of how much time and effort you put into your story, regardless of how many people you may want to like and enjoy your story, you still care more about your readers than ego. I hope if anyone has mixed up your story (written for the sole purpose of entertainment) with real life that they do take your advice. If you decide to discontinue your story for fear of readers misunderstanding I would beg you to not be afraid of your writing and trust your readers (especially after all of your very sincere warnings) to understand the difference. But I would also accept your sacrifice and still be a big fan of your writing. :-)
WMaldonado89 chapter 18 . 12/31/2015
Hello Sky..

Kinda disappointed I didn't get a new chapter.. lol

But I understand the need for this particular authors note, it should be most enlightening for others.

All I have to say is, don't let ignorant people get to you, your a phenomenal writer that is writing about a completely taboo subject.. Most people won't understand, or will choose to misinterpret what you've written because it IS so graphic.

Not many will understand the difference between abuse and this particular life style.. They've unfortunately associated true BDSM with that tripe 50 Shades.. True trash if I've ever seen it. That book was an offense on every level imaginable, but I digress, I encourage you to keep writing.

I absolutely adore your work and cannot wait to see where it progresses too, I am a little sad for our girl, she's fallen into quite the rabbit hole.. Maybe just a little love, huh? 'pinches fingers together' Just a tiny bit? lol

Anyway! Please update soon! I can't wait!
Decepticon Chick chapter 18 . 12/31/2015
Thanks for this update dear. I understand what your doing and it's nothing like '50 Shades of Grey'. I'm not into these sort of things in real life but I find something fascinating about it when I read them in fanfiction, I don't know why. I really enjoy this story and I can't wait for more. Happy New Year!
starcrossedloddy chapter 17 . 12/22/2015
Though she broke for a minute. Good to read she's still got some fire in her. Please post again soon! !
starcrossedloddy chapter 12 . 12/22/2015
I have not been able to stop reading this as soon as I started it. Greatly imaginative story! Even if kinda sad. So eager to see where this goes. Hope it has a happy ending :-)
donotgosoftly chapter 17 . 12/18/2015
I just started this story today and I'm already addicted. PLEASE PLEASE update soon!
Vanafindiel chapter 17 . 12/11/2015
You know, the more I read this, the more I'm horrified with this dark!verse you've conjured. And yet I'm very much entertained. I'm left cold at heart, but I want to read more.

Where are high elves, Galadriel and Elrond? Are they gone? What is happening in Gondor? Is there any hope for the race of men and elves?
Muntzy09 chapter 17 . 12/10/2015
This was great! Can't wait for another chapter. When are you going to write some more of Sky and Fili? I really like the dynamic they have and I'm always interested to read more of them!
AccountX1 chapter 1 . 12/9/2015
Haven't read the first chapter yet, but my comment is on the cover picture. God dang, it's epic! I automatically assume this is going to be good and it's going to make me hate Thorin just a smidge, lol.
CelticAngel86 chapter 17 . 12/5/2015
*SOB*
Noooooooooooooooooooo Lasl!
*WAVES ARMS AROUND HYSTERICALLY*
Why! Oh why did you have to do that to me to her to Sky to ME! Gah!

*Inhales deeply*

Alright, I shall try to remain calm...

GOSH DAMNIT! Somehow I knew you'd eventually do this to me but still! Gah! And the worst is you haven't actually said What you did! Snarl roar growl...

Anywho, that was still masterfully done my dear. I felt super nervous for Sky as she was summoned and had to make her way there to Thorins chamber. And let me tell you, that scene started out brilliant... Lmfao at Legolas' mounted head hahah...kinda want the whole story that goes with it now heheh...maybe you can slid it in from another dwarf, if he meaning Thorin was still just the prince maybe it could be Dwalin or Balin perhaps, since they're all close in age, just thinking heheh. I'd like to know the story on that rendevous buwahahahah. But then the interrogation and him burning her hand I was like "oh shit!" And now I'm like "oh hell...is he going to do something to Fili!?" Cause he lied to him too, and it's that whole how dare you lie to me and for a lowly whore-thorins thinking not mine-promise. But it raises so many "oh shit" thoughts and I WANT TO KNOW! Really though, these have been absolutely amazing and awesome chapters dearie and now I'm like "gosh dang it now I want another one to read" hahaha

So thank you so much for the as always epic continuations of such a schemingly brilliant story, I'll eagerly awaiting your next update and strongly encourage your muse to let it come upon you quickly! Much love darling! Your crazy friend CelticAngel!
CelticAngel86 chapter 16 . 12/5/2015
Dawwwwwwwww absolutely lovely! I so love the Fili and Sky moments, again I want to tell you how hard it is to pick which of the brothers I like best in regards to Sky. I know Kilis a bit of a pompous bastard not to mention a spoiled brat but certain moments between them are just so funny and the sexual tension is brilliant. But then you get Fili in there being all sweet and caring, while still being authoritative and it's all so aggravating and I just GRRRRRRRRRRRRR! But then again that's well done on your part dearie. Also, I really enjoyed the "infirmary" piece you give such good details on setting the scenes it's easy to imagine being there. So very well put together chapter once again, I thoroughly enjoyed it and will now hop over to the final chapter ️
CelticAngel86 chapter 15 . 12/5/2015
Ok, so again, I'm super sorry for being MIA for so long, going to do better I promise ya ;)

Now onto your amazing story, this was absolutely stunning and inspiring for so many reasons. You literally had me wanting to cry when Sky stayed with her guard, Torgan, I think that has been one of your most heartwarming and heartbreaking scenes. . . one of them. . . it just shows such a depth of character to Sky that despite her life in this hell-hole of a mountain, she will never change who she is despite what has been being done to her. I love it, if I were standing beside you I'd be squeezing you to death in a massive bear hug right now. And then Lasl, good God I absolutely love that lady. I don't know one way or another what you plan to do with her in the future chapters. . . hopefully nothing bad will ever happen to her (meaning death) but I love this comradery between Sky and Lasl. It just makes the horrible things always happening to Sky somewhat alright because there is someone there that will take care of her-even if its behind the scenes ;) When she was like "Sky" I was like oh man she's going all mother on you and scolding you Sky, better listen. It was fabulous, her telling her to run cause she truly wouldn't ever get another chance. And of course she gets lost, cause who wouldn't in that labyrinth. And saving Kili was still as epic as when you'd sneak-peaked it to me all those months ago. . . you make it so hard to decide which brother I want with her! darn you! But I suppose that tells the brilliance of your writing, you make it super hard for us to come to the decision of who we want her with hehe. OH! And just so you know, I LMAO when you slipped in that bit about the nobility not deserving gruesome deaths. . . except maybe Thorin. . . you choked me up with fits of laughter, I loved that!

So I'm going to go head and leave it at that, I need to read the other 2chapters waiting for me, no fear, you'll be hearing back from me soon hehe.
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