Reviews for Naruto: Magik |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Because you talked about editing to fix the flow of things in one of the dreams you either need to remove on of the words yo use for measurements. You claim 30 meters feet. Both measure distance or height. But the way that you are using it is distance. 30 meters is further then 30 feet. 30 meters equals 98.4 feet. While 30 feet equals 9.1 meters. So you would want to fix this when you are doing that editing. However while you are doing your edits. I do so hope that you will be updating and giving us new chapters at the same time. Thanks a bunch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it the only downside that is a three-way relationship is what I don't like |
![]() ![]() ![]() At the start of the new year you gave us a great update and we thanked you for it here it is almost the end of the year and we are still waiting on more. Which personally I find to be annoying. But I can be understanding about it as well. Please release another update soon it is a bit of a torcher just waiting for what seems to be no good reason at this moment in time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rest In Peace to Emi Shinohara the VA of Uzumaki Kushina. |
![]() ![]() ![]() for some reason i think its iron man reference instead lord of the rings |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Did Laura go back because the only two that you named were Illyana and Rahne. You made it Seem like Laura wanted to stay behind as well. And it’s almost been 8 months when is the next post coming out? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work on this chapter and I enjoyed reading it. The ending is still funny. And I loved the scene where Kakashi comes to pick Naruto up and met Illyana. |
![]() ![]() This is one of the greatest stories I have ever heard. I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have no idea how much i LOVE this story (Naruto: Magik) i started reading it two days ago and haven't been able to put it down, i sincerely hope you will continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Maybe some mutant hunters will try to attack konoha or something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When'll the Raikage learn about Naruto and come smashing through Tsunade's office door? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ive been rereading this story again and after this chapter i have to say other then Hinata being in the huge pain she is in its really great with the route you have taken here. Many things are how i wish the manga and series ended up going as well. Nicely done. And yes i know things work out and Hinata ends up with Naruto as well. And maybe Illyana as well but im not sure if that part as really been made clear on lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really loved reading this, was extremely entertaining. Equal parts comedy and seriousness all throughout the story. And poor (lucky?) Naruto, not only does he already have Hinata and Illyana, but now he has Laura and Shizuka circling around him, and Anko already teased her sweet apprentice that she wanted in on the action. Am I selfish for hoping that all 3 of them get welcomed into the family? Not all at once obviously, but after a nice uphill battle and having to go through the main wives first. On the positive side, at least Laura, Shizuka and Anko don't care about his status or heritage. Really eager to see the next update when you get around to it, until then. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Madam LadyBug caught me hella off guard lmao I love this fic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still one of my favorite Naruto/X-Men stories out there! :) |