It was one good and spooky tale to share.

THIS IS STARTING TO SOUND LIKE A GREAT STORY,,ITS VERY VISUAL AND TENSE SO PLEASE WRITE ON A FEW CHAPTERS,,,,

Wow, this is a ghost story and a half. It reminds me of a true experience of two English ladies and a French battlefield. But this one is packed with even more spooky stuff that would be sure to rattle a rational scientist like our Dr Grissom. Good work and keep writing!

this story is really good i like it

Spooky. I feared for the bug man's life. (I liked the part where he had a wife and kids - Sara, I presume. Good for you keeping GSR alive or whomever is his wife.) :-D

Pretty good!

Like this story. I hope you continue with it. Interesting choice to set this story in South Africa.

Awesome!