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I think I am forgetting the context of the ending of this chapter, I have read up until this point, could someone remind me?

Holy fuck, THE scene was amazing! Superb characterization, nothing vulgar (insofar as Yang can be non-vulgar :D ), and them feels!

Fantastic to see your work. You set the gold standard for this kind of story years ago, and your commitment to quality and consistency is an inspiration.

Yo, been enjoying the hell outta this (currently on chapter 17) but I was thinking: might've come up with a way to pull off some intros for JNPR if you haven't already. Jaune would be a shoe-in for a spacemarine, specifically of the blood angels, lamenters, salamanders, or the ultramarines. Pyrrha would fit pretty well for a custodes, given current canon, or perhaps as a phoenix lord on the way of the warrior perhaps? If you run with those ideas, perhaps it'd be prudent to add jaune as a member of the deathwatch. Nora and Ren would make a pair of Ciaphas Cain tier rogue traders or at the very least have one in the retinue of the other. As it happens though, I'm assuming you got past it, but if you haven't gotten to it yet by some miracle, have a RWBY character be reincarnated as a primarch. Jaune would be the best fit as most of the most prominent ones in the current setting look the most like him, particularly guilliman, and would add a whole new layer to things. Granted I'm not trying to be THAT jackass that tries to domineer a story in the way I want it to go, seen more then enough of those tossers about. These are but suggestions and ideas at the end of the day.

Glad to see you are alive, thanks for the chapter and take care!
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This was great and I'm pleased to hear that you will be posting regularly. But a uh warning would have been appreciated, I read most of this when I was slacking at work and it's, well you get it. Or she did HAH.
Anyway keep it up.

oh hell yes! always nice to see an update for this fic. Look forward to re-reading it every year! :P

Great chapter btw, excellent work on the sex scene. I thought you straddeled the line of tastefully sexy, without becoming overly descriptive, and especially liked how you maintained the charictisation of Yang and Amat without just turning the whole scene into a cheap smut fic. nicely done!.

I am very keen for more! can't waiting untill next year and we get consistent chapters. I will be keeping my eye out for it!

Cant wait to read more!
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Praise be to the Omnissiah!

Welcome back. Nice to hear that story on again gather momentum.

Fight was really nice. Makes sense that Yang lost without aura as she don't have much experience fighting like that. She performed way better with it. Her using full power really show up her might.

I am not big fan of "the scene" thematic and I browse this part but I perfectly understand why you put it in. It is big and important moment for Yang and Amet relationship development. It was also fun to see normally collected assassin acting like a greenhorn and letting his base instinct to control him. As such story would be lesser without it.

So he is sterile and we can't hope for kids, unleash Yang pull out another miracle.

Scene where Yang inspect herself and how much she changed by life in this world yet at the same time she is still herself at the core was also very nice. Not to mention that she was mental wreck just after arrival so change is good for her.

I wouldn't be surprised if Amat's awakened Aura un-sterilized him. That said, I dont think the narrative is angling to deal with that even if it would be an expected kind of accident to happen.

Anyways, great to see the fic is ready to go full steam ahead, again. Been a wild ride and its kinda crazy to think that the end is actually in sight

Thanks for the chapter & update! Good to see Yang's back on both of her feet, and ready to kick ass and take names!

..I know it'll only be possibly answered once they get to Terra, but I'm wondering if a *living* Saint will be able to get past / escorted by the Adeptus Custodes to see the Emperor/Ruby? Or if there might be any other RWBY cameos present..

Looking forward to the continuation!

As happy as I am at reading that AN at the end of such a beautiful chapterbeing cursed with the knowledge that there's 25 whole chapters of AWoBE completed and ready to go but i have to wait a year to read them is just...

Emperor give me strength. The wait is torture haha

YAY.