Reviews for The Train Station
Junie chapter 3 . 12/14/2014
Interesting. I think you did good wording the fight. But would the Organization really bother with some random girl? I'm sure they have a "No Interference" rule and try not to interact with the townspeople if they can help it. So that part was a little out of character.
I'm interested to see where this is going.
Junie chapter 2 . 12/14/2014
The story seems interesting. It's okay, but you really need to watch your word placement and grammar. Certain words don't fit, and some words are missing all together therefore making the sentences sound off.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/7/2014
How does Twyla not know where she is if she is a kingdom hearts fan?
M aeeeeee chapter 3 . 12/7/2014
I feel bad for Twyla. Shes so clueless, she could get hurt.
Gry18 chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
I admit, you got my curiosity.
Songbird Rebel chapter 2 . 12/2/2014
Pretty good so far :D
M aeeeeee chapter 2 . 11/30/2014

This is looking good so far! Is the clash of metal Roxas, or Sora? Seifer?
M aeeeeee chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
Ooohhh. Sound mysterious! I want to see what happens next! This is a great fic so far!