Reviews for On the Flip Side |
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![]() ![]() GET THE MARAUDER'S MAP! |
![]() ![]() Well that was fast paced lol |
![]() ![]() I like book Harry and Ginny, but in the movies I think that he should have been with Hermione. Movie Ginny was terrible. |
![]() ![]() Snape pull a full u-turn on the hating Harry's guts thing, now didn't he? Great story btw! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the crookshanks thing was perfect, loved the resolution to all of this |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Hi Professor." Snape mimicked. I love this line so much? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think your character analysis of Lucius was very on-point. Cold, desiring power, distant as a punishment but not truly desiring the return of Voldemort because it would threaten his current standing but still believing in purdblood ideals. Very good chapter! Poor Harry never seems to get a break, does he? Also, the ending made me laugh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really liking this so far. I've noticed that you don’t use a lot of commas in your writing, just abrupt stops, which makes it come across as slightly choppy sometimes. It was something I noticed more at first, but now I'm pulled in by the characterization and plot, and I hardly notice anymore. It's not a big deal, and if you don’t care for constructive criticism, just ignore it. As a fellow writer I appreciate notes, but I know not everyone else does. Honestly besides that, which isn't really a negative at all anyway (just something that caught my eye), it's a very nice story. I've been struggling to find new Severitus to read, so I'm super excited that I came across this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is nice, but really not my cup of tea |
![]() ![]() ![]() WTF is Slytherin Tower?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry refusing to talk about abuse is one of the dumbest tropes in HP fanfiction |
![]() ![]() Super thus far: poor Snape won’t have his usual target for retaking points from Gryffindor |
![]() ![]() thank you for the amazing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() my own personal view was that harry should never have been with Ginny. She was his own personal stocker. |
![]() ![]() Another great fic! |