Reviews for On the Flip Side
rosemary62442 chapter 5 . 6/30/2021
tower? they live in dungeon
rosemary62442 chapter 17 . 6/4/2021
only reason trelasney is in hogwarts is the propercy which was made 13 years ago she didn't teach lupin
Pink Cripps chapter 3 . 5/15/2021
Man, Harry must be pretty bitter towards all the adults in his life right now. Enjoying the story!
chaosesflame chapter 8 . 4/1/2021
I love harry and snapes relationship
Guest chapter 14 . 3/26/2021
lol so blaise is Draco now? LMAOOO
Stacy Damato chapter 32 . 3/28/2021
Is there going to be a pairing
Guest chapter 3 . 2/19/2021
As if they’re all playing some game
DJArla chapter 32 . 2/4/2021
I thought this was an interesting take on the protective Severus fic. I enjoyed the plot and character developments and didn’t feel like you rushed through it at all. I especially liked that the Slytherins came to accept Harry as one of their own. In terms of your writing style, the first thirdhalf felt a little ooc, I think because you focused a lot on exposition. But I felt the further in to the fic you got, the more your writing style improved. I look forward to reading the sequels!
Guest chapter 18 . 11/27/2020
Many fanfiction use this punishment with the Dursley's, and i only wish we got to SEE them struggling, to SEE how it is effecting them and maybe even how it is working.

Dementors feed of happiness - I don't think they were, in cannon, attracted to people with painful pasts, past emotional hurts, or people that were depressed or unhappy etc, that wouldn't make sense because they feed of joy, hope, laughter, and happiness - so they would be attracted to things like large crowds at the Quidditch stadium because of the excitement and cheer and happiness there. In cannon, they were there because Siruis was there watching Harry play.
I know this is AU and a fanfiction, but you used cannon logic and then contradicted yourself. I don't mind personally, the story is great regardless, but i wondered if you knew. xxxx

I also wanted to that say that Harry heard/or was told about Sirius killing 12 people in an early chapter, and then when he heard it agian, he responded like he didn't know this information. i think you have done things like that a couple times... agian, no worries from me in regards to my enjoyment of this story, but just a heads up xxx
Moderntimes 101 chapter 7 . 11/14/2020
Harry is expected to say Sir of Professor at every response to Hogwarts’ Professors, as mentioned first DADA lesson in HBP. Snape and Draco are acting a bit OOC. Interesting story, thanks for publishing.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/24/2020
I hope the dursleys will be put in prison where they belong, including dudley.
Fireandy chapter 1 . 10/22/2020
Awesome story, thank you.
Sammie4282003 chapter 22 . 9/28/2020
I am a huge fan of this fanfic, I have reread it over a dozen times!
destructiveraider chapter 31 . 9/25/2020
I thoroughly enjoyed your story! The idea is pretty unique and well-written; I love how many friends Harry made and I really reveled in seeing everything from a Slytherin's point of view. Severus is such a great Head of The House, even if he is the youngest one of them all. His relationship with Harry is lovely. I liked the way to developed it; and I did feel refreshed to see the lack of drama between them in certain moments - a huge difference from most Severitus fics I have read. All in all, you wrote a great story here and I can't wait to read the sequel and your other works! :***
Guest chapter 13 . 9/9/2020
it doesn't make sense to have the boggart there when harry is just starting to learn the charm. Much easier to conjure a patronus without the negative effects of the boggart and then try once he can cast the spell in its absence. Bad teaching practice.
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