I read the whole story through (again) and didn't want it to end. "One more chapter" left. I do hope that you continue - an epilogue, or two or three or four or more *smile* - of this story. I want to read more of Thorin and his children, of Wren and her magic, of Dis and the twins. I am being completely selfish, of course.

I can see how Gandalf would shed a tear or two in seeing Thorin and Wren dancing in happiness at their wedding celebration. Do, please, continue.

So glad I found this wonderful story! Thank you so much for writing! I can't wait to see how it ends.

Ha that was perfect

I find k liked the twins better this way. That would have just opened up a huge can of worms that was a shut door.

Now if that wasn't adorable I don't know what is.

Glad they made it! And enjoying themselves a bit lol.

That last line haaaa hilarious.

It took them forever, but gosh they are so sweet together.

Good to see the boys getting along.

One thing settled! Yay!

This business with Amrod is bugging my brain. He felt her magic awakening. And he has dreams too. Could he know? He was so quick to agree with Wren.

Easier to find him than I thought. I can't wait to see what happens next!

These two ...wow I do not envy them, but they are interesting to say the least to read about.

Holy crap! Hold it together Thorin! I feel like all I have been doing is reading this story of yours lol.

And there it was. Fantastic turn.