Reviews for Our Own Demons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. What the flip?! How did you come up with the science behind this magic?! Dark energy makes perfect sense in my mind, and it explains a lot of the magic behind the HP franchise. I had to read through some of the theories two or three times to make sure I understood it, and I'm really impressed! I don't think I've seen a more detailed explanation for this specific magic before. How long did it take you to write up these theories? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just gotta say, in regards to the Hogwarts student body and population of UK Wizarding world, is that I thought that each grade only had about 10 students per house per grade (e.g. 10 Gryffindor 1st years, 10 Ravenclaw 1st years, etc.). So I always assumed the student body was about 10x4x7 280 Hogwarts students (I would also assume that there was probably a baby boom in approx. 1983 onwards, so the 1st years when Harry was a 3rd year). So if the Hogwarts student population under 17 years (I think about a 1/4-1/3 of 6th years would be 17 by Jan 1st at any given time) was approximately 10% of the Wizarding UK population, that would be about 226-230 people under the age of 17 by Jan 1st at any time, which means the Wizarding UK population is approximately 2260-2300 people (that is also without the loss of life pose Battle of Hogwarts) P.s. sorry if this doesn’t make sense, I typed this at 12:50am and somehow promptly fell asleep, and I don’t feel like proofreading it 7 1/2 hours later |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. really. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. The conversation between harry and Steve was nice. |
![]() ![]() I hope that everything works out for you in the end! |
![]() ![]() I really like your special brand of science/magic! I may not know a lot on science and quantum physics as much as I would like but what you put in your story really makes sense and I really love it! Not to mention it makes the story vastly unique and your idea is really creative and original and its awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is honestly amazing! The characterization you accomplish here is to a level rarely seen in canon novels, let alone fanfiction! You are an incredible writer; I honestly think you could make a career in writing if you haven’t already. Your point of view switches are masterfully done, and you don’t overload with irrelevant details. I keep waiting for a Loki interlude (but that might be because I’m a fan), to set up for what part he is going to play. My only complaint is that there isn’t more to read! Please continue this work, I NEED to know what’s going to happen! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Writing a hero that can be loved, sympathized and identified with is hard but doing the same with a villain is nearly impossible. Congratulations you have done both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() in college I had eight hours of classes a day from nine in the morning until six in the afternoon. And I stayed until ten at night doing homework. Harry, what are you complaining about? |
![]() ![]() UPDATE THIS CHAPTER NOW! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! I like the plot and the way you are mixing timelines and stories. It is very unique. Thank you for writing this and sharing it. |
![]() ![]() just gonna say thanos will throw a hissy fit when death is interested on another person...and you DONT want the mad titan angry at you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story! I love that Harry opens up to Tony even though he is naturally distant at first. I think the Harry/Peter thing is adorable too. Thank you for writing this. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() A fantastic read! Hope to read more. Amazing work! |