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Great chapter pleas keep going

Very interesting story. Look forward to more.

I like it.

Great story! Please update!

LOVE IT!

Awesome story! Really wanna read more :)

Please update soon!

I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

i think i am going to love this story.

oh I love it I love Harry;s attitude really as tony's son even if they have not met that attitude was inherited lol more when you can :)

Great start to this story. I can't wait to read more

Again! Again! Again! *squeal childishly *

love this! update soon x

Very nice. This is the first story that I've read that Harry pushes for an emancipation instead of pushing for adoption into the family. Harry seems strong-willed like how he has ever been and I hope his spirit remains strong through his hardships. This story have a lot of potential and I give you my best wishes in fleshing this out.

You do not have any grammar mistakes as far as I can see but they are several typos. I don't know if anyone's pointed it out, but in the first chapter, when Pepper said, "You are not like your father." you wrote the 'your' as 'you're'. In this chapter, 'definitely' was writing as 'defiantly'. Just a heads up in case you mind these.

As for the story format, I don't have a lot of experience. I know that when uploading, you can choose between story and docX format so maybe the format can be edited to change? Ah, I'm not sure, sorry.

Take your time writing and I hope you're feeling well now. Good luck!