This started of well enough. I've been looking for a decently written Tony/Harry father/son fanfic. I don't think I'll ever get tired of the concept.

I hope you continue this. It's a good start and a nice twist to the usual Tony is Harry's father stories-I like most of the stories I've read that are that so I have nothing against them! It's just there are only so many ways people have gone about it so it's nice to see something new. I also love strong independent Harry stories and Tony Stark is always a fun character.

This is well, written, sort of. It's pretty good, the dialog flows smothly and all that, but it's riddled with typos. "Have" instead of "having." Missing "was" and the like.
It doesn't really affect the meanig, but it does catch the eye and forces the reader to reread that sentence.

I really want to see where this goes.

i like it so far and i hope you will continue this.

fascinating idea, looking forward to reading more!

More Please :)

Tony should take care of Harry and the good relationship between father and son will grow over time but they needed to start first. So Harry still the heir to Lord Potter's-Black titles and poroperties

It makes sense that abused Harry isn't going to be thrilled to know another man can stake a claim on him. Especially if he knows Tony Stark's reputation.

I would actually like to see this continue.

This is a good start to a potentially fantastic story!

Pretty good a little short but definitely different

I like it. The twist you have placed on this story makes it interesting and unique. All the while maintaining good flow and structure.

LOVE IT!

Great start! Love stories where Harry turns out not to be a Potter :)