Reviews for Our Own Demons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your take on Tony Stark being Harry's father, |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. I want to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Can' wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting plot :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, at least for once someone actually doubts Tony's ability as a father, because frankly he would most likely suck. He is very much self-absorbed, even later when he becomes a true hero, is (nearly) an alcoholic and worst of all: Refuses to separate his super-hero-hobby from his personal life endangering those close to him. Yeah. I wouldn't entrust him with a hamster, let alone a kid with traumatic past. This is really doomed to go wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() plz write more |
![]() ![]() ![]() it is a very good start, keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I love this type of ff. pretty please continue with it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story very much and look forward to reading the next chapter. I do hope that you continue this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. LOL Tony is being stubborn. Harry must get it from him of course Lily had her own stubbornness. Harry got a double whammy. :P I look forward to the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this version, Harry's a teen that's suffered but isn't timid, scared little thing. Instead it sounds like a bit more like canon... at least the very beginning of the series before he allowed himself to be walked over. And from there went to independent Harry that suddenly has a dad. Interesting. So if the barrister met Harry 3 years ago, Harry's about o turn 16... so Harry went to them when he was 13, the summer he blew up Aunt Marge and spent 3 weeks at Diagon Alley. Nice to see that Harry tried to actually DO something while he was there unlike canon where he goofed off in his time there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What was Lily doing in the Muggle world and how the heck did she get qualified to work as a biochemist for a giant corporation? Did she cheat on James or did she hook up with the boss and then get married after being knocked up? Either way it is slightly amusing and utterly horrifying that Tony thought Lily was so loose that he managed to slip in a joke about her being carelessly active enough to die from an STD. The man is either a good judge of character or an ass hole. Which one did you intend? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool chap, I like it , please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is very unique, I can't wait to see where you'll bring it :] |