|Reviews for I thought|
| Kmikaze KAtie V Also know as All American Patriotic Patriot Girl or AAPPG for short chapter 1 . 11/20/2000
that was pretty interesting
| Cat chapter 1 . 11/8/2000
Interesting. You might want to get a beta reader, though. You had way to many commas in places that didn't need them and that kind of messed up the flow of the work. Other than that and a few spelling errors (which you explained), I really liked this story.