Monday November 7, 2016.

Happy birthday.

Happy birthday! :3

it might suck now but it could always get worse.

hope things improve.

K.

I know how it feels. I turned 18 in July, 5 days after a damn tornado touched down in my backyard without me even knowing. I was pissed at that and I'm pissed at what we have to choose. I also hate the fact that I have few ideas and no drive to write the few I can come up with.

FINALLY! THANKS FOR UPDATING!

GOOD LUCK!

Sometimes it is a bit rough to read, but it still makes me laugh. Keep up the great work.

When did this turn into an interrogation?

Lol, he threw up on her. I'm surprised she didn't just kill him in public.

Keep up the good work

The new school year begins around april in japan

Your grammar needs serious work. You have a ton of redundant words in your sentences. You skip correct tenses, it makes reading this story trying at best. The good note is I do like the story, I think if you fixed the minor errors or had some one beta your work it would go from mediocre to amazing. right now id give you 4/10 for effort.

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon.

saji took up four chess pieces not 6 great , story though i cant wait for the next update!

Tuesday December 15, 2015.

Everything that was said to Rias and company was so spot on. It brought many plot-holes when DxD started out. Everything. What purpose did making more god killing weapons serve.

That was interesting