Reviews for The Legend of Zelda: End of Destiny Part Three |
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ZeldaOcarinaEpona chapter 19 . 10/23/2012 Umm no offense or anything but you've got the chapter numbers all wrong...this is supposed to be chapter nineteen not chapter seventeen. Chapter seventeen is called losses. |
ZeldaOcarinaEpona chapter 13 . 10/22/2012 I like how you had Link die then be healed and teleported to Termina. Very clever. And I like how Malon and everyone met the supposedly extinct race of the Sheikas. You are great at writing these stories. |
Ribke chapter 13 . 8/24/2010 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, U GAVE KRISHNA'S NAME TO A TRAITOR? SHUN THE NON-BELIEVERS! *shuns* ... Nah, I'll let it pass only cuz ah RLY like yer story! ) |
Rudruma chapter 1 . 1/13/2007 man its been so long since ive read not a story but a TRILOGY masterpiece job well done p.s this goes on my favriotes |
LokiMetabolic Zelda chapter 25 . 5/10/2005 simply wow. my god that was the greatest if not best trilogy i have ever read. the pacing in your story was remarkable and, that whole link going back to termina didnt see that coming. you are a truly gifted writer i laughed almost cried your story was truly amazing. i remember reading back in 2002 when it first came out then my sn got deleted and i gave up reading fanfics about 3 weeks ago i decided to look for it and i am glad as hell i did for this was truly amazing didnt even know that you had continued on with 2 more books seriously congratulations on your skillz well enough of this rant dont stop writing |
GM ace chapter 1 . 4/16/2005 As I type this, parental units are bearing down on me with chores, so I'll write a more detailed revwiew later. But for now: you are Awesome! Great! Fantastic! Shiny! ETC! Seriously, this is really well written. One of the best I've seen, and I've been wandering around in the Zelda section for longer than is healthy. |
dark dragon 00 chapter 24 . 4/11/2005 very good ending to a great story go you |
Taa chapter 25 . 4/2/2005 A message to my dearest Niz: If at this very moment you were to look up from your deservedly grand and exalted podium of authorship, you would see a humble girl, familiar but much grown since last she spoke to you, quietly slipping in through the back door to stand awkwardly and shamefacedly in the flickering shadows of the multitude of hero-worshippers you've acquired over the years. This girl is the one known (by the few who care to take fleeting notice) as Taa, and she keeps her eyes lowered in respect and utter humility, though the aura she carries with her speaks volumes of the intense delight she feels in having returned to you. Were you to look on closely, you would see the frequent tremble of her figure and water of her eyes, physical indicators of the private pleasure she takes (selfishly, admittedly) in reading the words issued from this great mind she unwittingly stumbled upon one significant day in July 2002. (Aye, she does remember it well.) She returns to you full of apologies regarding her unexplained disappearance, and full of praise for you talents, those that will forever and always impress her, those in which she can vividly see the truly human aspect of your highness. As ever, she is brimming with criticism, a quality of herself she will for the time being keep silent, as she's already given voice on this matter many times before and feels now is not the time to go into further detail. Later, she will again approach you as an equal, as is her wont, but just now she only feels the great desire to blow you a kiss and simply mouth the word "sorry", wishing to make her presence known as subtly and yet uniquely as possible. But if you were to watch a moment longer, she might ever-so-shyly wave a timid greeting your direction, and by motions and expressions, make it clear that what she means is this: "You're still amazing. I'll meet you again at One Man's Worth." |
Rodarian chapter 25 . 2/18/2005 I'm sure you still getan inflow of reviews long after you completed this Trilogy...Its simply one of the damn best stories I ever read. I had to review right till the very end of EoD, and that took me about a good day an a half..Yup my eyes are drained and I think I saw a blur of the sacred realm! LOL In any case great story..I could have sworn that I felt an imense dejvu as read through the chapters..But only to realize the fact that your story felt very real because you wrote in such a way to make it real.. Thanks and continue your stories...the Legends of Zelda indeed has better ring to it but at least we know who is the older on of the two twins! ;) :D |
Kiroshi chapter 1 . 1/10/2005 Wow...this is the best THING I've ever read...It takes down Harry Potter, destroys LOTR, and obliterates everything in it's way. ...I believe...with Nintendo's permission, authorization, etc...that this could be published and you and Nintendo could make a lot of money out of it:) And you could even go so far as to make it into the next GAME! That would be so sweet. |
Otijori chapter 25 . 10/26/2004 YAY. Finnally read it! Awesome story. I love Zakro, he reminds me of me. I'm a blue fish with gills. Oh, wait, thats my pet. I'm the stubborn jackass. ANyway, what does Stonecutter look like? |
Saeryn chapter 1 . 10/23/2004 A good setup for your trilogy, and a good ending to it too. Congratulations. |
Talent Scout chapter 23 . 7/21/2004 Well looks like somebody decided to use the end of the battle with Frieza to end the war once and for all great chapter and great well everything really |
Lizai chapter 25 . 7/15/2004 There was just one part that above all else, I feel that I simply must comment on, even though I know from experience that with this sort of thing, words make the meaning fade. (Oh, grief. More profound, "wise-sage-of-the-mountain" crap. When am I gonna stop doing that?) "We believe in you." For some reason, that part made my eyes fill up with tears. Now, that actually happens a lot to me when I'm reading fanfiction, especially when it's well-written: I get the urge to cry. But this was...different. I couldn't really tell how, and I didn't even know why this part made me want to cry. I still done. But...just something about that, about Link hearing all those people expressing their belief in him...it impacted me in a way no other fanfiction, book, or story ever has before. I don't understand it, but...kudos to you for such an amazing accomplishment. Oh wow, I am such a geek. On to slightly more lighthearted topics: I LOVED how you gave Malon significance. It actually made sense, unlike a lot of crap you see out there where it turns out she's the real Princess and not Zelda, or she's the eighth Sage, or somesuch nonsense, all of which do serious damage to the characters and plot of the game. Instead of just randomly having significance/power at the beginning of the fic, Malon gained her strength. Instead of just randomly finding badguys coming after her, she took the initiative and strode willingly not only into harm's way, but into harm's midst. It was so very well done, and I never even thought it could be done at all. So congratulations for a very well-written fanfiction. I just have one more thing to say: Goodness, that was a long (interesting, complex) climax! |
Michelle Lancaster chapter 24 . 5/6/2004 Man... I swear, rereading that is just tiring, it's so intense. But still...anything that ends with Link saving Hyrule and ending up with Malon can't be all bad! I love that Termina came into it, and I think my favourite part of all (though I have no idea why) is when Link was King of the Cage. I think it's just the mental image of someone calling him "a little girl of a man." I also absolutely love your characterization of Zelda-She's not a stupid little damsel in distress, thank the goddesses. Only one part sucked, and that was the one actual death. I was kinda hoping it wouldn't happen this time, but previous experience with rereading should have proven to me that that's one wish that never comes true. *Sigh.* Oh, well. I'm looking forward to seeing Link and Malon's kid(s). Writing him as a father provides endless amusement for so many reasons, and I can't wait to see what you do with it. |