Reviews for A Swallow to a Dove
hikingurl chapter 6 . 12/11/2014
I love your pen name. Can't tell you how many times I've thought of all the things I should be doing instead of reading fanfiction. Haha. And now that I have your lovely story on my list, I'll be spending even more time reading! Great job, eagerly awaiting more
majose chapter 6 . 12/11/2014
Lovely chapter. It coveyed so well the experience of abuse from the point of view of a survivor. I really enjoyed Esme's internal voice.
Btw-the story was also mentioned at a different forest's fic of the day yesterday
Guest chapter 6 . 12/11/2014
Loving your story :)
BelleBiter chapter 6 . 12/11/2014
(Btw: exactly the right response to those questions. It doesn't matter a whit which decade, which country, etc. Fiction is fiction, and its boundaries limited only by the minds that can't let go of facts in favor of it :)
2brown-eyes chapter 6 . 12/11/2014
I think the length of your chapters are fine, especially if you're going to update daily.
I am glad they are understanding of her and recognize the signs. It sounds like they will be good for her.
Edward's blue eyed girl04 chapter 6 . 12/11/2014
I think your doing great so far. Either way I'm here until the end. Thanks for sharing.
2brown-eyes chapter 5 . 12/11/2014
I just hope Carlisle is right about the abuse part.
I like the start of your story so far, looking forward to more.
2brown-eyes chapter 4 . 12/11/2014
I'm now intrigued to why the sudden marriage. It seems that there was more to it, like Edward was forced to marry her.
2brown-eyes chapter 3 . 12/11/2014
I admire her being so brave to put others (kids) above her own comfort level.
2brown-eyes chapter 2 . 12/11/2014
I'm just hoping Edward won't scare while he is grieving.
2brown-eyes chapter 1 . 12/11/2014
Poor Bella. It's no surprise she doesn't trust adults.
Jasveen chapter 5 . 12/10/2014
ooh i cant wait to read the rest!
moodyval chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
Is the story set in present day?
Isabela is Online chapter 5 . 12/10/2014
As usual. you made me want to read more. I so love to read about 's wife doting on Bella. Keep on updating. Thanks.
BehindEverySmile chapter 5 . 12/10/2014
Well believe me, you're much better at writing than I am...

As for reviews, I try to leave them but often forget!

I like the concept! Can't wait to meet Edward and the girl!
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