Reviews for The Hand We're Dealt
Pirika Anna Usui Kyoyama 0116 chapter 10 . 5/24/2017
Omg so cute ;3;
Bel Yan chapter 10 . 12/13/2016
I cried in every chapter dammit! It's soooo sad :( Great job!
Guest chapter 10 . 4/7/2016
I cried over every chapter of this damned story and I love it so much but god damn it, it was just so freaking sad!
LonelyDreamer7 chapter 10 . 1/14/2016
Omg I love it. Haruto is so much like his dad and tenten did a good job raising the kid; with the help of her friends of course. Overall I really enjoyed the story :')
Devektra chapter 10 . 7/8/2015
it got in a loss for words, you pictured really well all the characters, and yet kept a light narrative. i nearly cried in some scenes. thanks for sharing this history!
Kilalahinanaruto555 chapter 10 . 6/21/2015
When I saw this story I wasn't sure what to expect. But this was beautiful and so amazing I nearly cried at some parts. I can't express how much I loved this story, it was simply elegant. There was so much loss from the unspoken words of Neji and Tenten, but there was so much said when she was carrying their son, when she fought for him, and so many other times in this story. This is definitely going on my favorites list and I wish this had more reviews. This was a wonderful, amazing, beautiful story!
eirame chapter 10 . 4/15/2015
I appreciated the way this story was written. Each chapter was a slice of lice, which beautifully depicted Tenten's mentality through her life after Neji's death and Haruto's birth. And I never thought Neji would be able, through his Byakugan, to guess times of conception.
Thank you for your text, and may you never lack inspiration.
ScarlettBeat chapter 10 . 1/30/2015
Awww so good! It be awesome if Neji and Twnten REALLY DID have a child and they didnt show it for surprise affect.
sir-M-smarty106 chapter 10 . 1/29/2015
I loved every bit of this! Is it really finished? *sigh* it is seriously brilliant. And super believable! It's great! Now to go wallow because my expectations have once again been raised and it'll be next to impossible to find anything even close to as satisfying as this was. Oh the feels! Thanks for sharing! :)
Aquarius Galuxy chapter 10 . 1/7/2015
Enjoyed the happy ending. Was surprised that I didn't come across this sooner. Love how much like Neji Haruto is - I like that Tenten gave him a name different from what she'd had in mind initially. Also liked how she lost her anger towards Neji, and how you included glimpses of their relationship, and how Tenten wasn't really given to showing intimacy :P appreciated Hinata's help! I do wonder what Hiashi really thought about it all.. it felt like he was pretty apologetic about his clan's traditions :P
Thank you for writing and sharing!
xxxxx chapter 10 . 1/3/2015
I LOVE THIS. I have been waiting for a fic like this about pregnant tenten forever and I love the way you wrote it. Absolutely perfect.
Aurora chapter 10 . 12/8/2014
Aww this was nice, I think the idea is a really great one. I'm still not pleased that kishimoto-sensei sunk my biggest ship so i'm glad it continues at least in fanfiction.
Chisa Chispa chapter 10 . 12/8/2014
This is Beautiful
crazee chapter 10 . 12/7/2014
It's so cute :))))) I love it!
recey2010 chapter 10 . 12/7/2014
Most beautiful story Ever !
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