Reviews for Scorched Ooo
He23t chapter 50 . 4/1/2017
I wonder what happens next.
The Book of Eli chapter 50 . 4/1/2017
An eternity in the deepest part of the Night-O sounds about right. But still no sign of Finn where is that unstoppable dude at...
The Book of Eli chapter 49 . 3/24/2017
That was fucking awesome! Oh man and the quote from PB at the end well played I must say. Can't wait to see how you wrap things up...
Major144 chapter 49 . 3/24/2017
A very epic and awesome battle! Two rulers and their giants robots going at in a gigantic brawl! Well done! Good SHOW!

I also liked that bit where Flame King shows concern for his daughter, when she gets out of her robot and start searches for Bubblegum. Flame King sees that the war is taking it's tow on Phoebe's body and mind corrupting her in a horrible way. Flame King wanted his daughter to embrace a destructive lifestyle, but now he no longer wants that for Phoebe.

The part with Bubblegum trying to lip away and she has a contemplation moment about all the things she did and how she was repeating the events of the Mushroom War. It shows that to some degree she realizes she went to far, but she also knows there's no turning back after what she's done.

Now the war is reaching it's end with a weakened Phoebe closing in on an injured Bubblegum ready to end the other ruler once and for all!

Very intense!

I eagerly await the next chapter.
He23t chapter 49 . 3/24/2017
“People should either be caressed or crushed. If you do them minor damage they will get their revenge; but if you cripple them there is nothing they can do. If you need to injure someone, do it in such a way that you do not have to fear their vengeance.”
― Niccolò Machiavelli
Major144 chapter 48 . 3/16/2017
Another awesome chapter.

Phoebe is back to full health and at the controls of a massive fighting robot to do battle with Bubblegum and her robot. We get a interesting bit that Bubblegum is determined to show the world that she is willing to do anything to defend her people and win the war, which includes the use of WMDs. Bubblegum is just being delusional in her ways thinking that she is a grand and just force for good.

The bit with Phoebe's robot being shot out of the volcanic cannon, it kind of made me think of Power Rangers. LOL.

The final battle is on the way and this story just keeps getting better and better. :)
The Book of Eli chapter 48 . 3/14/2017
Oh man things are going up to a whole new ball game with two giant robots fighting it out. I love that when I'm visioning the future fight that the Megas XLR theme music is playing in my head. I can't wait...
Major144 chapter 47 . 2/10/2017
Another great chapter. The Fire Kingdom faced threats both old and new. Finn appeared and defeated Phoebe and her top officers, but in the end it all turned out to be Phoebe's dream.

What a twist!

The Cosmic Owl then explains to Phoebe that Bubblegum is a threat to the very balance of Ooo and she is the only one who can fix it.

The final battles draws near!

Great work!
The Book of Eli chapter 47 . 2/10/2017
That was awesome a future glimpse at the possible of what the battle would have looked like if flipped. And we get some cool moves from Finn if he was still in PB control. But still I can't wait to see what's to come...
He23t chapter 47 . 2/10/2017
Hope FP finally defeats PB after all she's done.
Major144 chapter 46 . 2/3/2017
Another great chapter. Phoebe is back in her kingdom and Flame King's plan for victory is revealed. It's an extreme plan, but dire circumstances call for drastic action. All I know is that the next fight will be epic!
The Book of Eli chapter 46 . 2/3/2017
Well last resorts often work out for the underdogs in war so yeah finger crossed. But there is still factor of who Finn is working for. I have a feeling he's still he wild card in this story...
He23t chapter 46 . 2/3/2017
War...war...never changes.
The Book of Eli chapter 45 . 1/20/2017
Hope a hell of a gamble and Bubblegum is showing her sadistic side by waiting to finish off her enemies. It'd be funny is she had Finn waiting or watching from a far to rescue her if somehow the destroyed her giant guardian...
caleb chapter 45 . 1/20/2017
poxa saudade da guerra
queria que o finn voltasse pra luta
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