Reviews for Scorched Ooo
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 70 . 2/11/2018
wow, I gotta say I'm impressed with this chapter, the wave of Enemies, the story with Santa and his sacrifice, and finally getting past the puzzle and finally meeting Simon and he gets some ice type abilities thanks to the upgraded and restored Crown of Ice, barvo I say, that was a ICE chapter, hope the group doesn't FROSTbite off more then they chew when they get back to the others.
Major144 chapter 70 . 2/10/2018
Another great chapter.

We see a touching moment between Betty, Marceline, and Phoebe as they move forward with their quest.

Some epic and intense battles with our trio of heroes pitted against ninjas, vikings, fake Finns, and onyx dogs. The battle was tough, but they managed to pull through.

Then we had a little quit time, where the legend of Santa and his connection to the crown was explained and we got a cool Fatal Fury reference. Nice one by the way.

And finally we have Simon brought back and have a happy reunion with both Betty and Marceline. A very well written and touching scene.

Now we just got to wait and see what the future has in store for our heroes and Ooo.
Ooobserver chapter 70 . 2/9/2018
Whoo, that one was a doozy. Even some of the normally 10k-ish stories I read couldn't compete. That said, I'm quite glad you put it all together; there would've been way too many points of anticipation.

Battered physically and mentally, the trio finally achieved the impossible: broke the most heinous curse in their world's history. Its hard to take in honestly. The road has been long, considering it was preceeded by a tedious and costly war. Where will they go from here? There's a lot to wonder about.

Speaking of a long road, you've just hit chapter 70! I may be dethroned here soon. Actually, I think Major144 already did that. Oh well, no one stays on top forever.
MarCor3 chapter 70 . 2/9/2018
THIS IS A GREAT READ - THANK YOU!
I'm torn with Finn's death, Bonnibel's imprisonment and just bat-shit crazy, and Ice King becoming Simon Petrikov again! There's so much in between too, with it starting off into a casualty of war between the Candy Kingdom and the Fire Kingdom - damn!
Anyway, I'll do my best to keep up from now on...
DistantPhoenix chapter 70 . 2/9/2018
When reading the part where the trio faced off the waves of ninjas and Vikings while fusing the gems of the crown, I kept thinking of the Vex from Destiny, since they were coming from portals over and over again XD. Fantastic work man. Can’t wait to see what’s in Chapter 71.
The Book of Eli chapter 70 . 2/9/2018
A nice wrap on this arc but I have to wonder now what will come of the group. And better yet how's Finn handling the afterlife...
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 69 . 1/5/2018
finally made it to the Fridjitzu Master chapter and I have to say everything was an insane ride so far... Finn dying, Bubblegum in the Nightosphere, Phoebe and the others struggling with Finn's death, and then the things the three ladies have to do to to help Simon, all I can say is bravo if you made this single handedly, bravo and I hope more chapters come since I want to see how this story ends.
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 30 . 1/5/2018
damn... Finn was a killing machine... and it looks bad for Peppermint Butler...
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 29 . 1/5/2018
seems Finn is now fighting the Fire kingdom and Peppermint Butler is on the run... man I feel bad for the fire kingdom right now.
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 28 . 1/5/2018
I mean CB... freaking auto correct on phone...
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 28 . 1/5/2018
dang, Jake has it ruff... sorry for the pun, and I hope CAB survives, but bad things happen in war...
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 27 . 1/5/2018
seems things are about to get to the Finale of this arc with Bubblegum and the war...
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 26 . 1/5/2018
seems that things for the candy kingdom is reaching a climax before the final fight with a augmented Finn is fought, and it seems Bubblegum lost Peppermint Butler and his guards as an ally when he and some others retreated when things went bad for him and his remaining men.
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 25 . 1/5/2018
Damn, previous fight with Finn aside, seems Phoebe can really kick ass if needed.
Twilight Master Emerald chapter 24 . 1/5/2018
the fire kingdom took a big hit in the attack but it seems like Phoebe is about to bring it to the next level on Bubblegum's forces.
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