When are you updating this story again. I need to know how it ends

Finally a good cross over fic i can read thats good!

can a jedi wear orange? got me hooked and was looking for more

main this whole story is amazing hope it updates soon

Excelente introducción a esta historia, me gusto espero leer todo lo que tiene escrito dar un reseña completa de la historia pero tambien hacer reseñas mas puntuales en los capítulos que sienta que merecen una aparte de la general y espero que termines la historia con epilogo incluido

New reader here, I saw your fic reccomended to me about 3 days ago. Binge read all of them. It's going to be weird knowing I cant binge more, but I'm interested in what's going on, that's for sure. A few things.

1. Xanatos is dead dead from Naruto and the queen of the arena basically mauling him to oblivion. (the mention he might be Bruks surprise contact thru the senator was... Odd) I'm unsure if that was a mistake or just a small oversight, or if you had a plan for that.

2. Their was a few one word misspellings, especially in earlier chapters.

Overall this is a great fic that I'm going to watch till it ends. Also Mand'alor says he is working with you to make your fic great. So I trust he will help your vision greatly. (genius use of naruto's planet btw and the namealso also Darth Vulcan?! What a reference, I would like to see more of him)

I feel it's time to shift Palpies plans a bit as well. Nothing public but his major plans are 2 fold. End the Jedi and end the republic so the Jedi have no reason to exist. (defend the republic) and of course make the public want nothing to do with the Jedi to spoil that opportunity even further.

Nar Shaddaa*

two A's at the end, not one.

I swear to god if this is a Darth Jar Jar story I'm done.

seriously, it's painful enough reading how the Gungans talk without having on become some annoying antagonist that's going to be doing their villain monologues in that voice as well.

It bothers me a tad that this arc on Nar Shaddaa and the previous arc probably could have just been combined into one story wise and nothing would have been lost. There are plenty of reasons for Naruto to "unleash the beast" searching for his friend on a hostile planet while connecting deeper with his Master (and then finding a holocron or two in some criminal hideouts that they've stolen from some shipments or looted and are trying to sell). Heck he could have even rescued some captured Wookie from slavery if the friendship with the wookies was really important as a plot point down the road.

it just seems excessive to have both stories happen so close together, it's all soon enough that Naruto really doesn't have any time for growth. Realistically the last arc was the stand in for a Nami no Kuni arc without any budding friendship with a Haku or real reason for emotional growth through loss, yet we then get this arc that seems to be hitting very similar notes. It's never good when you start feeling like you can completely skip reading some chapters without suffering any actual loss of story continuity or character growth.

doesn't it cauterize the wound? at worst he would be going into shock, but it's not like he's going to die of blood lose any time soon. I also don't think it would burn enough for him to experience any organ failure, not like he was in a fire. not sure what a med kid would do for any of that.

I just hope they don't go the route of making Naruto a mediocre strength Jedi like some of the other Naruto/SW crossover novels. especially if Chakra/ninjutsu is now off the table it really would be a letdown.

Hope to see this updated someday I truly believe this is one of the best works I've read

I just started reading this story, and so far it's not bad. But I have a question, why does everyone think Naruto is so stupid and gullible? After all, following the canon, one could understand that he hid all his genius and insight behind the mask of a fool, because who's afraid of them? He was just a kid who realized it was better to be a despised fool than a rogue demon.

Naruto doesn't know that he would've been the catalyst for the shinobi world to change. Without him, the shinobi world will be stuck in perpetual war forever.

I have seen star wars: clone wars and majority of the movies but that was almost if not more than a decade ago. So I remember very little aside from names of Anakin, Ahsoka, Obi-wan and Yoda.

Now that I have caught up and read all the chapters, I will address my earlier reviews.

Chapter 26:
What is first priority for the Jedi? Sith or Republic? As I am ignorant of much of star wars-verse, I am assuming Sith as Jedi Order was formed with the purpose of combating them and Republic came into picture because Sith were assumed to be dead and dusted. As you said Holocrons cannot be cloned, wouldn't it then be a simple matter of destroying it rather than studying it? What with it having such a strong connection to dark side that multiple masters need to sit together to combat its influence and the possibility that it has a connection to a spirit of a Sith?

Chapter 55:
Well that was me nitpicking...meh

Chapter 63:
So that was explained further into the fic.

Chapter 114:
So I still stand by that. Not going for kill shot against bounty hunters, followers of Bando Gora, other normal criminals is understandable as a pacifist and against Dark Jedi like Xanatos is ill-advised but whatever. Against a Sith like Maul where it was a one versus one with possibility of external interruptions and objectives left unaccomplished with a little sense of urgency is downright stupid...as stated multiple times how dangerous it was.
Now enter the fight with Zealot. Hoards of Jedi knights and masters incapacitated, Oracle in danger (whose destruction he had foreseen), surrounded by friends who doubt him and situation as urgent as urgent can be... Naruto is spouting absolute BS. Would Naruto have turned back from his path in Abbaji if some random Yam'rii told him the crap he said to Zealot? That realization has to come from within rather than without, which Naruto should have realized by now. I think that moment was the peak of Naruto being prideful, nay arrogance and I am guessing plot-armor at play here.

Itachi was also a pacifist. Still he slaughtered his entire clan consisting of his parents, lover, infants to prevent deaths of people he doesn't even know and who don't care about him. He isn't even a Jedi and was younger than Naruto (whose entire life is based around meditation and thinking things through) when Uchiha massacre happened.

I am pretty sure Zealot is the one who caused the massacre in the Jedi temple. I wonder if Naruto will still try to make Zealot see the error of his ways when his inaction has already caused deaths of 9 Jedi and who knows how many else.

Naruto has been doubtful of Jedi since his first interaction with Bruck, so why has he never discussed the same with any masters like Dooku or even try to clear the air with a private meeting with Yoda or Windu? This feels on par with not reporting that his saber was stolen and letting himself be setup.

Lastly, it feels bad to see that fic is likely abandoned. Hopefully we will get to see a future update.

I knew it. I was always wondering why Naruto never reported that his saber was stolen? That is a BIG red flag and not saying something when he had been lucky enough to be not setup the next day itself is just plain asking others to do - well what just did.