Reviews for What Might Have Been
PastOneonta chapter 8 . 12/5/2016
As I began to realize what had happened and what was happening with Neal I grew more and more sad for him. When he recovered in the hospital it was heartbreaking. He had Peter and El and Mozzie and his life as a CI and he survived a horrible idea but it was still heartbreaking. There is a bit of hope and encouragement at the end and it was welcome. Thanks for another wonderful story.
govgal chapter 8 . 1/29/2015
Friends do have the best intentions most times, but it can totally get awkward. I'm glad that Neal was able to talk to Peter.
Guest chapter 8 . 1/2/2015
This story is not bad, I didn't like the end. Sara is dating someone else? How in the hell could you do that? You ruined the while story with your stupid end :(
Guest chapter 8 . 12/20/2014
This is so sad...but a really good story nonetheless!
NYWCgirl chapter 8 . 12/15/2014
Great story.
MarJan53 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
I like Neal being who he really could have been if he didn't turn to crime I like the idea of Mozzie being Theo butstill being his paranoid self we know and love Neal's not being able to say no resembles Matt himself and Simon has gotten Matt away from crowds much the same asTheo is described as doing Ii love fiction that reflects reality in a clever way
Sblack78 chapter 8 . 12/13/2014
I loved this! Your story is original and kept me interested. I hope you write more!
pechika chapter 8 . 12/15/2014
Enjoyed Neal's dream, hope he finds his special someone. Mozzie being called Theo was cute
peppe1951 chapter 8 . 12/13/2014
Wow, what a great story. I wanted tonread it without stopping to review and did just that. I thought originally that Neal was the famous artist, then that it was all but a fream when the truth came out in the end. My only regret that is the real world Sara and Neal
got back together. Maybe Neal can see for himself that his coma dream can still work out...and he can become that great and legit artist. Well done!
govgal chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
Yeah! I'm excited to see where you go with this. I thought Neal & Sara's first interaction was priceless.