|Reviews for Henry the immortal alchemist|
| gabelou1991 chapter 2 . 7/2/2020
| TheOperaticSquirrel chapter 2 . 12/16/2014
This is really good so far. I would love to see some more of a reaction from Harry and Ron, especially Ron since he had a thing for Hermione anyway. One would expect them to be a bit more surprised that their best friend since eleven just shows up with an army and a husband and claims to have been alive for the past 600 years, even if they deal with magic every day. And are they really going to kill Snape without ever finding out that he was trying to help them win all along, that he really didn't wish to kill Dumbledore? Also, in this is Henry from the 14th century or did he go back in time like Hermione? Anyway, this story has a real strong start to it. I especially loved the way you were able to create a parallel between their immortal lives and the book series.