|Reviews for The Pond Twins|
| TwinTigerLover chapter 2 . 6/7
so, this is the first story in a long time I;ve read with limited mistakes, but about half way done, in Jef's bedroom you've got some repeating words, that made me laugh.
"the doctor was type, type typing"
| cat.m.ford chapter 169 . 5/4
Wow, finally finished this after a week. Sorry, I'm a slower reader. First thought when I started reading this: Oh thank god! An OC story not in first person; too many I've read are first . . . ugh. Thank you so much for that. And in addition it was written well. Even though a lot of the dialogue was copied from the show you didn't keep it bare boned and you add details and slight changes. I've read a lot of 'Adding OC to original storyline' fanfics but they just word for word copyed the whole thing, while also only giving their OCs lines that other characters had said. I know you did the latter at times but you also gave her her own lines and character traits. So I'll add another Thank you! I know you've been writing a sequel and I do want to read it but I'm worried. We all know the 12th Doctor comes at the end of this series but, don't hate me please, I can't stand the 12th or 13th Doctor. This is what worries me I really don't want Lexi with 12. You been having the story follow the original pretty close so I'm guessing you're going to continue but I kinda hope you change the 'end' and make it a happy OCx11 story from start to finish. Anyway, good job and keep up the amazing writing! (Sorry for any grammar mistakes. It's late here and I wanted to finish this before heading to bed.)
| NyxPonderosa chapter 2 . 4/25
*claps* Love it
| NyxPonderosa chapter 1 . 4/25
Love the intro! Great character development of Amy's twin :)
| Secret-writer91 chapter 16 . 12/27/2017
Rory deserves better. Amy really was rubbish to him in the beginning, I wonder what River wants her to change
| Secret-writer91 chapter 5 . 12/27/2017
Can't wait to see what comes next. Amy still not mentioning that she's meant to be getting married
| Secret-writer91 chapter 4 . 12/27/2017
So Lexi decided to forget. I don't think the Doctor will like that
| Secret-writer91 chapter 2 . 12/27/2017
Got a feeling there is going to be some competition for the Doctor's attention. Poor Rory
| Secret-writer91 chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
Love the addition of Alexis and I can't wait to see how things work out with her around
| K.Daniels chapter 167 . 12/2/2017
I'm literally sobbing. This is my least favourite episode of DW. It's equally as heartbreaking as Donna's end.
| K.Daniels chapter 161 . 12/1/2017
I have so much love for this chapter.
| Spazzy13 chapter 168 . 7/25/2017
This all made me cry! You did this sad sad end justice and this entire story has been amazing! Now you're on to the sequel and I'm very excited!
| NicoleR85 chapter 168 . 7/20/2017
I loved reading this story. I can't wait to read the sequel and how Lexi reacts to Clara. Please post it soon.
| Ichigo0-0Rose chapter 167 . 7/20/2017
Well, thanks for the heads up, but I still cried. TT_TT Literally puddles at the moment. So I cannot wait for something happy. :)
| NicoleR85 chapter 167 . 7/20/2017
Another great episode. I always cry when reading/watching TATM. I can't wait to read the next one. Please update soon.