Reviews for An Unexpected Christmas Miracle |
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![]() ![]() I like your story, but your timing is way off. I’m not sure why you’re using such unrealistic timeframes? They leave the lodge with 40 minutes to go. It’s a five minute walk to the diner. They order, the food is cooked, they eat, pay, find a store, go shopping trying out 35 snow globes and who knows what else, all in 15 minutes, since they still have 20 minutes to go? How is that even possible? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve gone in the wrong order but I’m making my way through this story series. You’re a brilliant writer and I said this before but I love how your portrayal of characters is so canon to what I would expect to see on the show. I obviously read ‘weathering the storm’ first so it was nice to backtrack and read how they came to be together. Looking forward to reading the rest of this series |
![]() ![]() Absolutely loving this story so far! As a writer myself, I try to give some points of praise and also some constructive criticism when I write a review. So, I hope you'll take it as a compliment that this chapter (and story in general since I realize now that I've read it at least once before) is so wonderful I don't know where to start with the praise. So much so, that honestly... I can only find one... ONE thing to even criticize in the slightest. And honestly, it's not even really a criticism, more of a very minor nit-pick. Early on, when you mentioned the Doctor and his "Fellow" pink and yellow human... just the way you used the word fellow implies that both the Doctor and Rose are both pink and yellow humans... something the Doctor definitely is not lol. Honestly, that is the only thing I could find to pick on. Well done, very well done indeed! |
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![]() ![]() Great good |
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![]() ![]() ![]() One of the best i have seen in a while was amazing ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was awesome! Your story...just fantastic. I love your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AGH ITS SO CUTE |
![]() ![]() ![]() My gosh, they are so cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wouldn't mind it either. I would love to wake up to a friendly face, such as his. Unless he was wearing purple, then that would be my worst nightmare. Those who've seen Jessica Jones know what I'm talking about. This here, between Rose and the Doctor, it's so sweet. |
![]() ![]() Doctor would not get me up that easy... great story by the way:-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() simply loved it i just love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh know for the feels you were feeling. But my whole body just sighed the kiss is just perfect i hope mine comes out nearly that good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() there he goes acting like a 5 year old again. just has to know whats in the bags. oh the anticipation its killing me and i know whats going to happen i already read it once lol. oh yes better do it in privet. more fun that way |