Reviews for Harry Potter and the Inquisitor's Game
entelejent chapter 2 . 5/10
Love the beginning, it's so relaxed and game-like, with wonderful options. It's nice that the writer didn't hurry through it.
WildlyLaughing chapter 11 . 5/10
Love the story! It was interesting to see characters from RWBY, but I will say that you pulled it off quite nicely. I've read some of your other works and I'm always impressed by the quality of your writing and world-building
Batman1998 chapter 11 . 4/18
I'm loving this and I like arya, aife and lily as characters it's both different from Harry Potter but still fundamentally similar.
Halo Star Wars X-over fan chapter 11 . 1/19
I have to say that while I like the story and all, there is barely any story as 75% of this is all stats and information that clogs up the story, it would probably be better if you find a better way to format all of the game stuff or to simply put it in a entirely different story meaning you make a “index” story that lists all of the game aspects of Harry and have the actual story in the real story instead of the game aspect just clogging everything up and causing the reader to skip more then 50% of the entire chapter.
Guest chapter 11 . 1/15
You aren't really going to leave us with this cliffhanger are you?
Beeswax2 chapter 11 . 1/8
This story is EXTREAMELY GOOD !

I'm ADDICTED and need my fix !
thisguyyouknow chapter 1 . 12/30/2017
Maybe I'm just playing too much of it but trick weapons from bloodborne would be a interesting addition even if its simply the trick canes that only inquisitors use or saws that the unseele prefer for torment. Fingers crossed for harry with the burial blade
Dragoncraft269 chapter 11 . 12/19/2017
This is a really good story and I am looking forward to more!
Axcel chapter 11 . 11/22/2017
Okay finished the long chapter and gotta say you surprised me again in a good way. Looking forward to Harry the asskicker strutting his awesome.
Axcel chapter 11 . 11/21/2017
The normal knees confirmed it. Add in her apparel and she clearly was taken in by Ruby Rose. Yay!
Axcel chapter 10 . 11/21/2017
You know, the names of spells are their names, not their incantations. It is not the protego spell, it is the Shielding Charm, etc. the names are given frequently in the novels.
Axcel chapter 7 . 11/21/2017
Your creativity continues to wow the audience! And Harry's thoughts on potions class. :)

If you're not cheating you aren't trying hard enough.
Axcel chapter 6 . 11/21/2017
Formians inspired by Ender's Game?
Axcel chapter 5 . 11/21/2017
Harry should have quickly told them about the unseelie he witnessed with Hermione as a fellow witness.
Axcel chapter 4 . 11/21/2017
By the way I don't think you gave us a description of Aife's appearance. Not even hair and eyes.
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