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![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story ! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo! Bravo! Good story, bit of an abrupt ending, but the rest of it was exceptional |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How come Cauldron isn't stopping E88 from doing this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well aint that typical lol... Lung as well as the rest of the ABB are WAY too interested in kidnapping girls, perverts all of them lol... |
![]() ![]() ![]() How come Cauldron isn't stoppning Coil? Since Hax has 100 times more value to them? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Besides, divorces rarely if ever go to court... Lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still say, Barnes is a DIVORCE lawyer... I don't get why all authors are picturing him as some hot shot super extra incredible lawyer specialised in crime... My sister is a lawyer dealing with corporate law, and she would never try to defend in a criminal setting or trial... He's not read up on the related legislation... It's like hiring a pediatrician as a neurosurgeon, "they're both doctors"... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this story is my fav so far of yours... XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sure, Alan Barnes is a lawyer... A DIVORCE lawyer! He's not a good choice for defence... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still a good read the second time around a few years later. Thanks once again for sharing your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the very entertaining story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for another awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly, an evil cliffhanger, luckily, all the chapters are already out for me lol |