Reviews for Trump Card
TheShami chapter 24 . 5/21
I am so fucking pissed at you just letting regent off the hook and working with the undersiders. It makes absolutely zero sense. It has pissed me off so much that im probably never going to read any of your writing again (not that i expect you actually care about a random stranger on the internet getting pissed at your writing, nor should you). The only reason you did that is because of your own personal bias towards them. No sane person in that situation without knowledge of the plot would go along with this unless they were an absolute doormat. Granted, im biased as well because i loathe the undersiders. However, i stand by my point that no sane person lets go of the person who tried to kidnap them this easily and then goes on to team up with them “because they need friends their age.” Bullshit.
Daemon Sadi chapter 37 . 5/3
another interesting story.
thanks for sharing :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23
Insect Queen Bee-Exobytes/(bioMech/Nexus/Heroes of the Storm)Zerg/Tyranids

5-U-93-R

Symbioids
Elven/Prime

Human replica synthdroids

Medi Chlorian Mechu Deru Vitae
Yuuzhan Vong biots

Kwisatz Haderach Drone Tok'ra
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23
Xanatos (copy Ultimate Archmage familiar Steel/Iron Clan/Talon Commandos/Thailog shock troops)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20
Echidna

Kirby Helper (Dashing Superguy)

Midnight Bliss

Amazos (Paragon, Vartox)

Adaptoids (Super, Ultra) Ultron Drones, Symbioids

Power Man, Wonder Man, Eradicator, (Al) Fred Superman Robots
Cadbury, Punjab, Asp, GKR 23, G.(ee)K.(e)R.

Warbucks, Hank Scorpio, Anti Matter Earth Three Luthor Mazahs, Ozymandias, Edison Rex, Axel Brass, Moloch, Richard Rich, Scrooge McDuck, Pennybags, Doc Savage, Regina Tesla

Kwisatz Haderach drone Tok'ra

Medi chlorians Mechu Deru Vitae

Yuuzhan Vong biots

Volcanic Asteroid Technodrome

Shmoo

Krakoa/Superego/Phalanx seeds

Techno Organic Jungle virus Intergalactic Empire of Wakanda

Telefloronics

Asteroid M(s)-Krakoa mysterium/Arrako/Okkara Amenth- Savageland(s), Danger/Cerebra, Planet X Attilan(Zero-Techno-organic-Technoarchy, Phalanx, Barbuda, Builders Mulitple Man

X-Lantis

Yuuzhan Vong biots/Star Forge

Sunstone/Fortress of Solitude(Kole)/Martian Bioship/Wonderdome/New Themyscira/Thalarion/Mythlands-Cosmopolitan, Multiethnic/Omniethnic/Citizenry of the Empire of the Silver Snake/Zerox/Skartaris/Nth Metal/Mother Box-Element X-Celestial City/Warworld
Deadfallman chapter 20 . 4/10
"Since when did you learn sarcasm?"
"Built it into my heads-up display."
Fucking gold
Sothur chapter 2 . 3/31
"Hell no."

Noice
Wicked.A chapter 37 . 2/17
Nice story
scyfly chapter 36 . 1/22
fucking called it.

this story is much too long and then suddenly far too short. you spend too much time on school bullies and prep for heists, the heists itself were realy cool though. in the end it was looking like this story wouldve ended unfinished with only the 'first chapter brockton bay' then it is suddenly over and we get an epilogue.

i also think leets power couldve been used much more inventive, but that mightve been straying into SI perspective.

it was a cool read but couldve been far more
scyfly chapter 34 . 1/22
again you contrive a situation that sees an unlikely interruption during a critical moment. its just too unlikely to happen again and again.

how did she even miss emma but not the gang following her
scyfly chapter 34 . 1/22
since when does e88 care about kidnapping? im not sure if its fanon but it wouldnt suprise me if its real: e88 kidnaps female capes and send them to gesselschaft to breed the next gen capes.

ofc who thinks 'hey this girl is off limits by alexandria let go kidnap her because some idiot said bad things about us'
scyfly chapter 33 . 1/22
i feel if you're gonna pull a heist like this you should tell beforehand why. right now it just seems stupid, if it isnt stupid then wouldnt alexandria agree and just give it to her?
scyfly chapter 32 . 1/22
well that fight was so long it got boring, wasnt even really a fight tbh
scyfly chapter 31 . 1/21
the portals can even cut something without resistance? endbringer killer?
scyfly chapter 29 . 1/21
sounds like that pocket space is a good way to kill dangerous shit, or at least loose it somewhere no one cares
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