Reviews for Trump Card |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this one so far. Taylor's Trump power is clearly still the Queen-Administrator - it's a much purer expression of the QA's true function than what she had in canon. The way she gets around Leet's limitation is awesome. I look forward to seeing what she can do with Panacea's power, as well as Tattletale's. As for Coil, he'd be an idiot to let her anywhere near him - so much of his schtick depends on concealing what his power can do, and no cape can hide that from Hax. |
![]() ![]() ![]() heh. threesome end. I feel like choosing either one would feel off since they primarily had all the Bonding scenes together. overall great plot. story could have been longer and give more exposition to characters mentioned in the epilogue but that's what you get. it's nice to see a no deaths scion run. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this chapter is so insane. how does anyone keep up on the timelines holy molly |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Glory Girl would 100% have killed someone who wasn't a brute or wasn't wearing actual power armor there. That's... not great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The New Wave call here seems... wrong. I don't imagine that New Wave in the phone book would link to the Dallon's home number, Carol or Sarah would almost certainly have a business number going to either one of their cell phones or an answering service. Unless Taylor looked up 'Dallon' on the phone book, which seems an odd way to contact New Wave when they have an official contact. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Trash Vic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. This was a great read. |
![]() ![]() Uber/Victor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! I love Uber and L33t! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was a fun story. Thank you for writing that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha your end tag made me laugh out loud. All the bad guys got atomic wedgies in my canon, just FYI. Great story! I really enjoyed reading this a lot. Thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the funniest shit I’ve read in a while. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha that chapter fucking rocked and I have no idea how you wrote it without going insane. |