|Reviews for Shattered|
| Starlafoxfire chapter 1 . 2/15/2021
very well done. thank you
| Guest77 chapter 1 . 3/9/2020
*sobs* that was beautiful written. You are right about the male rape being not properly addressed/dealt with in fiction. Just because it’s man, doesn’t mean it can’t happen/or that it’s the victim’s fault. That argument is bad as saying that women who are pregnant with their rapist’s child don’t deserve to get an abortion. Enough of my ramblings. Poor Wally, so glad Artemis was caring and understanding. And I sure hope that crazy bitch, Queen Bee, gets what’s coming to her. And hopefully, it’s from Artemis.
| Woodpeckers nest chapter 1 . 2/24/2019
You handled this sensitive subject very well and mature. It's very realistic and Artemis meeting Wally with such patience and understanding is truly heart-warming.
| IWriteFanfictionBecauseOfEggs chapter 1 . 7/30/2018
Honestly, no fanfiction has ever gotten me to cry and this one was close, I could feel the tears coming. It was so good, I love how Artemis was so accepting, and Wally just couldnt take it, he couldnt, he believes he cheated on her, he didnt think he deserved her, he didnt understand why she wasnt mad.
All in all it was absolutely amazing
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2018
I remember I read this like two years ago, and it's still really good
| SunBinamra chapter 1 . 3/11/2018
Okay, I just left a review on another fic about my heart breaking but YOU PULVERIZED MY HEART HERE, damn it. Oh god, poor Wally, I sincerely hope this doesn't happen (or has happened) in canon, no offense. But I love the way Artemis supports him, that is beautiful.
| fredstarwrites chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
I like this because it's very mature and this how a person would react and this a subject that never gets mentioned let alone written about
| RedRoseWhiskey chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
Oh this hurt me. This hurt me so good TT
| Blaze Stone chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
Very well done. I tend to play along with whatever world the author tries to create but this is something that always bugs me. Well done.
| Spirit Of The Black Wolf chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
Holly shit I'm not sure what to say... It was very good story very emotional and very thought provoking it probably possible for it to happen with Viagra and those kind of drugs. Just think how many men are being verbally, emotionally and physical abused by their wife or their girlfriend and don't tell anyone just because of the stigma they get from it.
Looking forward for you're next fanfic.
| Random Reader chapter 1 . 7/2/2015
Wow. This...this is...I really don't know what to say (and for me to be at a loss of words...) You captured the emotions and the characters beautifully! One thing I look for in fanfictions is for the characters in the show/book/whatever to be believable. Would Wally and Artemis, if placed in this situation, really react like this? You did a great job at making me believe that this really happened to them. They are both just too cute and sweet! I love it! :D I also really appreciate the author's note at the beginning. Glad to see people out there who think outside the metaphorical box. ;)
| WonderWalrus chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
I really love this, because it shows a vulnerability in Wally that is never really explored in the series, and Artemis' response is just perfect. Awesome.
| Huntress chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
Anybody else really wanna kill Queen Bee? This story really appealed to the characters internal emotions and thoughts mainly Artemis'. It plays with the readers emotions as well. It triggers the " I gonna kill Queen Bee" emotion. This wasn't offensive and it's appreciated that you put that note I the beginning. So basically, your story is awesome!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
I haven't, actually read your story yet ( sorry! I really sure it's good but I wanted to say this.) Thank you for your authors note, rape is not an issue that should be treated lightly and it should be taken seriously for all. It touched my heart to actually see someone say this outside of books and spefic talks.
Thank you so much.
| Bookworm85 chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
I think you did a great job writing about this topic with sensitivity. That trope makes me mad too, and I'm glad to see you challenging it.