I love this fic so much, it's amazing! Thank you for writing this :)

I thought this fic was going to focus on Taylor

I don't see why they don't just take her parents with them. Dinah clearly also thought this, saying "You said you'd take care of my family," but Taylor deceived her and decided "taking care of them" meant getting rid of villains and supporting them financially, while they wallow in depression over the death of their daughter.

She asks "Why can't I take them with me?" and Taylor sidesteps the question, instead directing the conversation to how Dinah's life would be unpleasant if she doesn't join the Society, and how much she can help by joining the Society, which is completely irrelevant to the question of why Dinah's parents can't also come live with them.

Finally, she asks to see her parents to talk about it, and Taylor goes on about how if Dinah gave the choice between her leaving and staying to her parents, they wouldn't let her leave. But that isn't the choice she should be giving Dinah's parents. It should be this: "Dinah has decided to join the Society to help save the world, with or without your permission. Now, do you want to join her or stay here?" With such a choice presented to them, they would obviously be more compliant - it's basically the exact same method she used on Dinah of giving the illusion of choice by presenting a set of options with only one clear winner.

RILEY UOU BEAUTIFUL GIRL

No matter what world he’s in, Jack is a right bastard

I know I'm a few years late but I really enjoyed this. Shame it's ended as it did. Will follow because I believe in miracles.

My man's this was amazing. Jack is easily the most compelling Worm character and this bizzaro world does him absolute justice.
Honestly, I kind of hate you for stopping here. Good shit, fam

This is so incredibly good, I hate how I only have two chapters left

Ouch, poor world, poorer entities and, if they exist at all,. Cauldron.

Intruiged, as Mr 1 said.

this was one of the best action scenes ive ever read, on par with the original worm. written clearly and unconfusingly without losing the sense of tension, im sad the fic is abandoned

For anyone else death would have been the end, but she give me one last gift.

-Should be 'gave'.

Interesting story. Sucks you killed Crystal. Laserdream is one of my favorite characters.

Gosh, this is incredible. Just reread it for the 4th or 5th time, might be the best fic I've ever read. Amazing stuff.

trash fic

Thank you for writing this.