Hey Linz and Greg! Just realized that i've been reading this and haven't had the time to stop and tell you that it's a great story! When's the rest of it going to come out Greg? I'll keep checking every once in a while although I sure that Linz will tell everybody on her blog when the next chap is up! Luv it Luv it!

hex you for the cliffhanger! more! :)

Hey Greg/Lindsay! its Megan from skool! lol. read ur fanfic...its soooo good! tell me when chapter 4 is up! okay? lol ttyguyz skool!

Omega-reader here. This looks wonderful. The plot is coming through, and all the details are in place. I never thought I had a knack for character development... We'll probably post another version of Chapters 1 & 2 (with ~'s), but that shouldn't detract from our audience. Squee! This is so much fun! )

there's much to like here! the WIA thing is clever, very clever way to separate r&h for plot tension. i like the way you developed ron's character. character development is never a bad thing. :) i would love to see more chapters!

Great start so far to both of you. I think this is the first decent post-Hogwarts fan fic that I've read. Keep up the excellent work. Can't wait to see what happens next!

wat the heck why u have it in h/h no wonder u have no one r/r. Change it i dont want this fic in h/h section and nether does the people that read h/h if u want r/r change it to h/g or h/r i dont care which just change it

i think it has good qualities, like the dialogue seems to be very natural. I like, although the chapter could be longer. Anyways keep up the good work i'll be looking for more soon.