|Reviews for More Fragmented Ideas|
| INeedYouForMyPaganRituals chapter 6 . 10/1
You've mixed up amused and bemused. Bemused means to be mildly confused, rather than amused
| tanithlipsky chapter 7 . 8/22
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/26
This was excellent. I'm unused to seeing writers other than myself express reasonably sound philosophy,
| thepkrmgc chapter 7 . 6/17
interesting character study, people get so focused on the heroes that they forget the ones who made them who they are
| thepkrmgc chapter 4 . 6/17
good gamer fics are reliant on comedy, try to keep that in mind if you continue this
| thepkrmgc chapter 3 . 6/17
revans a character with a lot of potential, and you write the banter with trask well enough to make me sympathize with the boring tutorial character
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 6/17
of course with naruto's luck everyone else will end up broke
| Bobboky chapter 7 . 6/9
Very good work
| yellulhchicken chapter 5 . 6/5
cool. 10/10 would read more of this.
| HP-DG-SB-NR-RG-PN chapter 6 . 6/1
This is fantastic! I'm really hoping that you'll take this chapter idea and run with it. It's looking even more hilarious than the original story this spawned from. Your character portrayals for this set are absolutely fantastic and I'm really hoping to see more of them.
| Pyeknu chapter 7 . 2/17
An interesting way of looking at things here, Chilord. Pity you didn't include Billy Batson's father and how he would reflect on being Captain Marvel/Shazam.
| Kal824 chapter 6 . 2/10
Good lord do I want more of this
| Speed Reader chapter 7 . 12/11/2016
These chapters are all amazing, thank you for everything.
| amortentiate chapter 7 . 12/10/2016
Holy Crap! This is one of the best snippets you've ever posted. Wow!
| ShaiGar chapter 7 . 12/10/2016