Reviews for The Black Queen |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So eventually a happy ending Though I wonder why Duo was in a mental institute anyway? If he is ill they wouldn't let him get away that easily, would they? Does Natasha really have amnesty? Maybe she's just pretending? I mean before the epilogue there isn't anything incidating that. No head injury or so... However this is a great fic! Quite angsty, but thrilling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well written, and very entertaining. Ja ne |
![]() ![]() Hey ! i'm reviewing this even I read the first story . I have no idea WHY but the first story and this just wouldn't leave my mind and it made me think alot . This is one great fic and so was the first one ! I'm definitly going to re-read it again and again cus thats how much I like it ! keep up the good work ! |
![]() ![]() Your Story is awesome. I've already suugested it to a friend of mine. Keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() _ great work Vi! I wish now that I'd read this sooner! now to read something else *browses through other fics* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sure am eating this up! did he really part with a good pair of boots? such a waste... |
![]() ![]() HAHAHA Heero in white boxers...m anyway kina confusing but really good! |
![]() ![]() Did Duo shoot em or not? I dont get it? If he didnt then who did? |
![]() ![]() What the hell? Ok I Like this fic and al but this chapter was rather confusing and to me makes little sense... |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, i read both stories and they are great is there going to be another one in addition to the sequal? well can't wait later |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, you don't know how much that Sven thing sucks! But anyways, I loved the rest. The ending was perfect! Not too sappy, and not too depressing either. I can only hope you plan on a sequel to this sequel...though I wouldn't blame you if you didn't! lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, you forgot to put an "end" at the bottom of your story. ;) Despite being well written I still like "Completing the silence" more cuz you're writing style was more unique there. And it's probably cuz I imagined a different background for Natasha. Although I do not know what exactly. *smiles sheepishly* I really liked your Natasha. Anyway I hope you're going to start working on another story since it would be sad to have so much talent wasted. Hellcat p.s. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Really good sequel to a really good fic! And finished just in time for me to reach the end... nice timing! (Yeah, because you finished it just for me... right...) Anyway, I loved this fic! Poor Natasha... :( And I'm still confused as to what happened with the maid, but... Happy ending for Duo and Heero! Yay! Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am quite incoherent right now. VERY nice ending. Suffice to say: Wow. |
![]() ![]() I love your writing, I remember when you wrote completing the silence, i don't remember if i reviewed but i remember reading it...I cried...I still cry if i read it over... I cried during this one...and it takes a good writer to make me cry through a story. But, your stories do make me cry, and if i read them again, they'll do it again. I feel lucky to have been able to read both Completing the Silence and The Black Queen. |