Reviews for Out of the Dark and into the Green |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wait a minute... Harry is sixteen, isn't he? So the trace isn't gone yet. That would mean, that when he casted the unforgiveable, and wasn't under the protection wards(?) of Al, it doesn't matter, if wizards live nearby, the aurors would come nonetheless... Am I right? I'm not, am I? I liked the chapter and it is always amusing, when an english author brings a german sentence or phrase into the story. (I am Austrian) So... As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very emotional chapter. Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor harry he did that to courtney "for the greater good" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice enjoying the story! |
![]() ![]() I like that this shows that while he has killed someone he has not lost all of his compassion. |
![]() ![]() I enjoyed this chapter. Sort of feels like the story is going to change soon, I'd almost prefer Voldemort didn't come back, but I guess he needs to. Can't think of anything that didn't work for me in this chapter, so good work. |
![]() ![]() It'd be interesting if Lily was really related to the Gaunts and Voldemort. Love the story, only qualm is that you should speed it up a bit |
![]() ![]() ![]() poor Harry when will you have the time to rest good chapter ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now that was a great chapter. Just loved how Harry handled the situation. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry had to do it to survive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I hope Remus and Sirius get to Harry before anyone (including the dark side) else does. Update soon, please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. More, please, more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, so that explains how Harry woke up under water. I wished the killing was more like self-defense than the way Harry did it. Not that killing another human being for a simple case like revenge is right, but you know how I am. Don't much care for it. However, I'm very interested in the story, especially now that I know Al's full name. I'm very much looking forward to Sirius meeting Harry and Al in the future. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Didn't care much for Harry learning the Dark Arts, but as along as he won't turn evil, the idea isn't off putting for me. I don't know who Al is right now. I need more information. All I know is that he is from a pureblood family and must have been in Slytherin House at Hogwarts. That doesn't narrow the results down of who Al is. I might be able to figure it out in the next chapter or so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter. Glad to see Sirius out of prison and (hopefully) will be free of all his charges soon. I will read more tomorrow. |